/me melts you. *whines* I have to choose!

Wonderfully written!I was on the edge of my seat until the spirit told them "You have restored my faith in man and Youkai, thank you" then he disappeared. That was so cool ,and the fact that Sesshy didn't forget her arousal when she touched him was a nice touch! well done, good show!

You did a good job on the back story, but i know it was rushed. It is better now that it's been beta'ed >.> but yeah i know once you get a chance to flesh it out, it will be awesome!!!! YOU CAN DO EEEET!!!!!!

I love Japanese Myths. <3  I really liked reading this. You kept me on my toes till the end. I specially liked how you killed Hojo.. I never liked him. *giggles*  Awesomeness alltogether.

Oh, good grief. A time of danger and the bloody regal taiyoukai was turned on?! Seriously =)) 

I burst out laughing at that part. Nice plot, but it can be fixed a little more :)

Really great story

You do not suck >_> this was awessssommme!!!

HEY IMPATIENT DUDE. I realized, you were like HOE you didn't say nothing. BUT YOU HADN'T SAID NOTHING EITHER AHAH.

I got to read this thing in development, and OH DEAR IT'S LIKE AMAZING. Even more so when it's complete. I know you whined a lot, but seriously I don't know why. I still love how you have the beginning being the legend, I think it just draws the attention right from the start. It made me curious as hell as of how you were gonna tie that whole thing together.

Having her friends knowing really is the best part of this thing. I don't know, it added a different dynamic I'm not use to reading and it was quite freshing; I loved it. Also, it was fun when Inuyasha came along and they were all excited to see him ahaha! By the way, I AM STILL SAD that Hojo died. I'm telling you, when the guy is not made out to be a creepy stalker, I like him ahaha.

BURN INUYASHA BURN! Kagome thinks Sesshomaru is stronger. See I wouldn't want him around because he's strong, I'd want him around cause he's sexy. AND APPARENTLY KAGOME THOUGHT THAT TOO! Ahahah that was hilarious.

You twisted that Sense prompt around and made it into a very creative story, nevermind what you think! Girl you are too hard on yourself let me tell you that much. I really enjoyed it and it had a nice dynamic. 

And mmm KISS. I like that ending. /winks/winks/. 

That was an awful lot of story in one short little piece!  I did enjoy it, and props to you for getting it out with the little time you had left.  I knew you could do it.  And you managed to fit in everything that you wanted; action, mystery, romance and a little death.  Poor Hojo.  I think the mystery aspect was a little lost with all the clues given and explained in the very beginning, like details of the legend and an explanation of the journal.  Also I think there were some continuity issues, if Mikao's tragic story was in the 1840s, it would be unfamiliar to Miroku unless Kagome had shared her history books with him.  I could be mistaken though.  All in all, that was fun and great for something you don't usually write.  I hope we both do well in the tournament so that we might face off against each other :D

this was good i dont know what you were talking about!

If I do puppy eyes do I get more then? Great!

Sigh... Why did your story have to be so great? I would vote for you myself if I could.