I am thoroughly impressed.
I sincerely hope you won, because this was *amazing.* Poignant, beautiful, bittersweet, heartbreaking and haunting but also sweet and joyful. I really really REALLY love this fic. Right up there with my love for House of the Moon. <3
All of the tears, sniff ;_;
so beautiful, the stories
in that heart of yours
So well written. I loved the simple structure, and the mystery. We get the full story of them and their relationship, without needing to hear about every single instance. Great job :)
TalaUSA (Chapter 1) - Thu 13 Oct 2011
I will not lie, I'm crying. Sweet and sad. Thank you for writing it.
You're amazingly good at writing. I haven't given out that compliment in a while because it's been really difficult to find a story with an author who deserves it. It amazes me even more that you manage to write so well and fit so much meaning into one short drabble per chapter.
I write my own fics on here as well but I haven't tried a drabbled. Reading yours has made me want to try. So thanks! ^_^ OH! And I know the fic I'm commenting on now doesn't really count as a drabble but I've read almost every single one of your fics...so yeah. xD
Ritska (Chapter 1) - Thu 14 Jul 2011
I love your story. I had tears when I read the letter.
Lyra (Chapter 1) - Thu 14 Jul 2011
Not funny or angsty, perhaps - but very nearly perfect. A beautiful idea, executed equally well; wonderful work!
sara (Chapter 1) - Mon 04 Jul 2011
This is really good and I´m usually rather picky but I like this. The slow build up is realistic and much more believable than "love" at first sight. After all how can someone talk about love if they don´t even know the person. The exchangings between them was rather adoreable and even if they are opposites they still make a fabulous pair beause of that. Well done.
This story keeps captivating me everytime I read it. I adore it. I love the way you write them.
chii (Chapter 1) - Sun 03 Jul 2011
i think i just fell in love... ooh love!
Oh sky, this was wonderful! It was so sweet and so bitter at the time, for a moment I feared as the end neared he had messed it up, but what a fitting end!
Aw, Sky it was very sweet. A simple chance meeting turned into something more. :)
Madison (Chapter 1) - Sat 02 Jul 2011
Oh dear! I remember you being all "jklfjdklf" in chat over finishing this. Well let me tell you hun all your frustration and hard work paid off because this was freaking amazing. I'm glad your mind got to work again and you produced this wonderful piece! And trust me the last thing this was was boring. I LOVED IT!!
No not boring at all. It was sweet. I liked a lot.
Kuro (Chapter 1) - Sat 02 Jul 2011
i really liked it! sad it was only one chapter...wish there was more!
oh i like this! it's sweet! you could expand this too!
Wow, extra work paid off eh? I honestly loved it. And the chalk bit at the end was sad! I wonder if that's an unspoken theme this round... Anyway, I think you did a great job. Don't dount yourself!
I love this! It was so sweet!
TKE (Chapter 1) - Sat 02 Jul 2011
All I can say is.....WOW!!!!!
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