That was cool Skye an awesome take on friendship. I liked it and i love how incompatible they seemed. Great job.

An everyday story, of an everyday relationship, and what everyday can do to a relationship. The only difference is that in this slice of life, the ending is a happy one, when it could have easily gone the other way and does, for many people. I loved it for its very simplicity.

Very nice and realistic. I´m so glad that there are mature writers who write stories like this, were we can read about problems that we ourselves have in real life. Young girls and sometimes adult women often can´t see that the attraction on first sight has nothing to do with real love which is based on really knowing your partner, friendship and trust which takes time. Passion is just the spice to it but without the basics it wouldn´t last long.

I´m also glad that you portrayed Kagome as a mature woman. Many writers make her older in age but forget to let her mature like all the other characters which is really annoying. I don´t know how many stories I stoped to read as I saw that Rin was suddenly an adult whithout being a teenager first and Kagome was still portrayed as she was when she was first pulled through the well.

Thanks for sharing.

You made me little sad and hopefull at the same time. I loved the way you write their uncertainties, but also faith and trust on each other. <3

A great story, it left me kind of speechless in a good way. :)

OMG. Skye. Seriously. I havent read Lady B's yet, but if it's anything like this it's gonna be sooo hard to choose between you guys! This story was heartwarming, and beautiful, and I wanna beat you over the head because just as I was getting ready to read this I was thinking about writing a story with the same idea (two people in love, married, yet unhappy and dnt know how to fix it) but now I cant because I'd never be able to top this!!!!

It was lovely, and I enjoyed every bit!

You've depicted perfectly something that is so real. People are in love, or it's that happiness of beginnings and you go into things without thinking anything will go wrong. But you also showed their strength of wanting to hold on, and that doesn't always happen. I found it truly beautiful and it was easy to relate to, all the feelings and thoughts.

Superb!

Ah! Skye I loved it! And boy if that doesn't happen in probably every marriage. It sux :/ You portrayed everything so well, the whole thing was great. Awesome job!

o.o your evil BT you know that right, you dont get to write nearly enough and the first time you do in forever you make me feel happy and heart broken at once. I want to be mad at you for that, as well as glad that you did it too. i suppose that means your kinda awesomesauce, even if i feel a bit like a beloved kicked puppy

Awww that was so sad yet so sweet! You did a wonderful job and I hope you keep it up!, I wanna know what happens *steals some of r0o's bribery c0okies and wiggles them at you*

Skye! This has an amazing amount of emotional growth happening, yet you kept Sess and Kags in character. I think the only thing I would have liked to see would be a conversation between Kags and a firend ont he state of her marriage. This is incredibly realistic for an AU romance between the two and sheows that physical romance isn't everything. 

I <3'd this so much, I really got emotionally attached!

~QuothTheDragon

Beautifully written, they are both more masture and I can understand their feelings and actions. A marriage is definetly difficult to maintain in love (emotionally) and physically , over time.... friendship is the only basis of love emotional and physical, my husband and I started out as friends, became lovers and are still friends and lovers to this day. He willforever be my first and last love and lover.

Oooh, it was all sexy and romantical.  I liked the emotional progression and how you balanced the "disappointed" element of the prompt with the "friendship" angle.  It did feel like a balm that was meant to heal which I don't think I quite executed as well.  Props to the Skye!  And of course, updata soon!

Ohh very nice Skye-chan, very bittersweet, but happyish at the same time :).  I really enjoyed it :).