I'm so excited you updated the story!!!! I was in tears over the last chapter and I can't wait to see what'll be happening next :)
Ya want to know something? Well too bad Im going to tell you anyways ^-^ anywho I work nights and I had read the first four chapters of your story before going to sleep... all night I couldn't stop thinking about it and wondering where it was going...
I don't know what it is but something about your story drew me in...hehe...
that is the good news...the bad news is that towards the end of the last chapter something got me kind of worried...
I don't mind stories that take place in the modern era I really don't but more often then not they end up in a night club like that is all people ever do to enjoy themselves and meet people (okay alot of people do stuff like that but still). Im not going to tell you how to wright your story cause I would hate it for someone to tell me... so Im just going to say it would be disipointing, on my part, for it to follow that common route, this story seemed a bit more mysterious than a club scean would dictate...but hey what am I saying I was drawn into the first four chapters I'm sure what ever you write next will be just a well writen ^-^.
BWY I can't believe Kagome lost 800 years with out realizing it hehe.
Nyuka
Jenna (Chapter 4) - Sat 28 Apr 2012
Beautiful! I never would have imagined that so much time had passed, but I like it. I hope you update again soon so that we can see some of the interactions between Kagome and Sesshomaru. I'm really excited for the next chapter, and I hope you're having as much fun writing it as I am reading it!
Margie (Chapter 4) - Fri 27 Apr 2012
Awesome fic! How many years has Kagome been the black swan?
Kim (Chapter 3) - Wed 07 Mar 2012
I love your story. It made me cry.Please wirte some more.
herbal~tea (Chapter 1) - Tue 03 Jan 2012
Please do write more, your take on this epic piece was so refreshing. Have bookmarked your story and look forward to your future work.
Fish Wishes (Chapter 3) - Mon 12 Dec 2011
Nice. Please continue writing! Thank you for writing with harsh realities. As heartbreaking as it is, it's still beautifully written.
I can't believe this story has been getting neglected. It's written wonderfully and I cannot wait to see where this goes. (I also happen to love dark fics.)
Oh and I listened to Moderato while I read this chapter, the mood was perfect.
-E.C.
Chapter was written well and I find this story so fascinating its such a different take of the characters.
wow okay I can't wait til for an update to this. I like how kagome is portrayed in your story and look forward to Sesshomaru coming up.
Jenna (Chapter 2) - Fri 28 Oct 2011
Ohhhh, this is gonna be good! I hope this fic is beginning to get the appreciation it deserves. Can't wait for another chapter to go up! I'm not above bribery...
wink417 (Chapter 1) - Thu 27 Oct 2011
great job!
Fish Wishes (Chapter 2) - Thu 27 Oct 2011
Woah, woah, woah. How is this not gettin' more love? The way you've written it makes my skin crawl, but god I love it! You intergrate the time scenes well (I have it when someone writes "flashback"). I'm excited to see how you'll place all the pieces together. Thanks for writing and please continue!
Fish~
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