lotophagi (Chapter 1) - Thu 12 Jan 2012

Amazing, i like it a lot! I'm not sure if you have any plans on continuing this still, but my vote would be yes.


Akitomi Vampiress Queen (Chapter 1) - Tue 04 Oct 2011

Can you plz continue this. I really loved it and I would want to know what happens to them after everything.


wickedone43 (Chapter 1) - Tue 30 Aug 2011

Yes...continue, please!!!!  I think I've already said my peace but just in case you missed it...

YES!!!

 

This fic is awesome!


wickedone43 (Chapter 1) - Mon 25 Jul 2011

YES, you should continue this!  It is awesome!

 

 


KaminokoDaughters (Chapter 1) - Fri 08 Jul 2011

It was interesting in both its ups and downs, but there was a sprinkling of few spelling/word misuse errors throughout. Overall, it still had it's appeal. 

 

--Kaminoko (c)2011


Raelia (Chapter 1) - Mon 04 Jul 2011

I agree, the idea's a tad overused... but either way, I still want for you to continue with it!! :D


Trelweny Rosephoenixwolf (Chapter 1) - Thu 30 Jun 2011

Lovely story. A bit more on Kagome's view on her ending relationship with Inuyasha than her budding relationship with Sesshomaru though -just seems unbalanced to me. Well written though, and a pleasure to read.

Though you Could continue this, I feel it is perfectly delightful the way that it is. I'd only suggest you write more if the inspiration to do so pushes you. Otherwise it's just fine as a stand-alone piece.

Thank you for writing!


Infinite Silence (Chapter 1) - Wed 29 Jun 2011

I love this story, really. I was reading your ending authors note and I was thinking/hopeing that if you did continue it that you please, oh please!, don't make it like all the other stories out there. I really hope that if you do continue it, it's something original and that is epic! :) However, even as a one shot it's still a really good story, I love how it played out and how you built it to a climax and closed it. :) Please continue to write.


Sakura (Chapter 1) - Tue 28 Jun 2011
This was an amazing one-shot! i loved it! i really do hope u make this into a chapter story! People would mot likely say it would ruin it, but with the way u write, and the plot of this story, u can make this a very long and awesomee story. if u decide to add more chapters, i hope u update soon

Shay (Chapter 1) - Mon 27 Jun 2011

It was good. It makes a good oneshot but if you want to continue it as a full story thats up to you.

There were a lot of grammer and spelling mistakes, and misuse of several words and punctuation. If you plan to make it a longer story you should get a beta-reader to edit it for you. It certainly has potential though.

If you would like this oneshot/chapter edited, I would be happy to do it for you.

Overall it was a good oneshot.


mary (Chapter 1) - Sun 26 Jun 2011

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