The story has a very interesting plot and is written well except for the glaringly large amount of spelling and grammar errors. The same words seem to be misspelled throughout the entire story and it was only the fact that it was interesting, unique, and well laid out for the most part, that kept me reading. It needs a beta reader very badly. I hope to be able to continue reading despite this.

--Kaminoko (c)2011

so are the betrayal and broken heart yet to come or would it have been what Inuyasha did to her already? I'm not sure if she could recover being betrayed again...she definitely wouldn't give a second chance if Sesshomaru betrays her I bet. or is she having more trouble with her powers because of her betrayal by Inuyasha?

wonder what Sesshomaru will do when he finds out just how dishonorable Inuyasha was...so...is the miko that Sesshomaru's dad kinda liked Inuyasha's mom or was he going to cheat on his mate with two different human females in the end?

will we see Rin and Shippo? I bet Rin would really like Kagome

this is such an interesting story line

I love It!!! Can't wait for the next chapter.

 There was just one thing I wanted to point out. When Kagome runs into the meeting room she says "I am very sorry for the incontinence, Tashio-sama. Well, incontinence basically means you don't have control over your bladder. I'm pretty sure you meant inconvenience