The title "For Who I Am" suggests a story about love finding a way despite differences or insecurities, yet the first thing that happens is Kagome gets turned into a demon. That was a little off-putting, to be honest, but I kept reading because your style is one of the nicer ones I've found.
The large warning in chapter 3 seemed a bit unnecessary. One mildly suggestive sentence hardly deserves a trigger warning.
Despite that, the story is still entertaining so far and I would like to see where you take it. Though I do hope that any blooming affection that may or may not happen between Kagome and Sesshomaru aren't simply because she's no longer human.
Sora (Chapter 5) - Mon 05 Sep 2011
Great chapter! I loved the title, I loved the hunt. What I liked the most is Seshoumaru being a hot blooded man inside. How his eyes strayed to her ‘inappropriate’ form, how he desperately tried not to fall for her – this was delightful scene for me. Thank you, please continue, when you have time :)
Sora (Chapter 4) - Sat 03 Sep 2011
Welcome back! I liked how Kagome was trying to get along with Sesshoumaru and his reaction to it. I enjoy your story. :)
Sora (Chapter 3) - Sat 16 Jul 2011
First part was so fun! Oh, and the song ‘Another One Bites the Dust’ by Queen! That threw me into a laughing fit! Now I'm going to giggle every time I hear this song...
So… next they will be traveling together, huh? That would be interesting!
I greatly enjoyed this chapter, thanks!
Sora (Chapter 2) - Tue 12 Jul 2011
I love your story! Interesting beginning, I wonder what's next.
please update
great chapter i can tell that this is going to be a very wonderful story and i'm looking forward to the next chapter but can' t help but feel bad for kagome i mean i love the idea of a demon kagome i'm just worryed that with sango being a little wary of kagome for i feel that if kagome lost songos friendship it whould hurt kagome and that whould cause her to turn uncareing yes i'm a kagme fanboy looking forward to reading more great chapters and storys to come
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