Good chapter, keep it coming Happy New Year

I think this is a good story needs some work on the spelling but coming together nicely.

Yay update. Thought it was great. Can't wait for the next. 

weewww.... can't wait for the next chapter~

Happy to see the update! I like how their relationship is progressing thus far and am looking forward to seeing how it grows. The red string of fate is a topic I've always been interested in too.

Not to sound greedy but MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!

I like your story very much.  I like that the red thread of fate the center for the story.  I look forward to reading more.

Great story, keep it coming. Happy Belated Valentine's Day!

Wonderful update! I can't wait to see what happens next.

Hmm... and I thought you are aware of everything, Sesshoumaru... ever heard Shikon no Miko? No? Well, that human girl is the one, you know *snort*

For first fanfic and first chapter, this is really a good start :)

Enjoying your story. Can't wait to see what happens. 

I am in love with your story so far!! Please keep it up!!

I just started just this very moment. I really like your beginning. Perhaps take a bit more time to flush out the backstory some, as not everyone is aware of the red string of fate. :) 

OMG! I was waiting this story for ages! I gave up waiting every other story I follow except this one!

I never hoped to see it, but here it is! Thank you so much! I wish you a lot of inspiration and free time. 

Hi,

I'm enjoying your story so far.  But a 2 small comments that could make it better:

1. Gravity is 9.8 METERS per second per second (i.e. the rate at which the speed of Kagome's fall is increasing, is 9.8 meters per second)

2. The story feels really rushed.  It's almost as if I'm reading story notes.  I wouldn't mind a little more detail in the interactions between the characters

-chili

Now this is an interesting and fun idea for a story. Hopefully it doesn't taken you as long to update the next chapter. XD

Cute story.Hope you will be inspired to finish it.

I like your story very much and look forward to reading more.

I hope you continue cuz I want to see more of sexy Sesshoumaru! :3 Even though he appeared in this chapter, not much action with him yet. I'm anticipating how he and Kagome duke it out. 

And besides the little mistakes that slip the eye here and there (but don't we all have those?), it's overall a pretty good story. :) I love red strings of fate! They just make everything so amusing! 

Also, will Inuyasha be totally jealous when he finds out that Kagome and Sesshoumaru are destined (kyaaaa love triangle?! XD).

Update when you can. :)