That is down right crazy. btw it was a complement and my thanks for writing such. Hope you come up with a new chapter!

Well now. That had to be an interesting thing to watch....Especially for Kagura, she just sat there and watched as kagome did that? Impressive, she must be truely seething on the inside.

Oh what a plotline you have. It keeps getting more interesting.

Jealous females are a pain. Even worse when it's a situation like protection and gurading. *sigh* I hope Kagura learns quickly.

I will say something about the chapter and how it came accross. That was a lot of info and insight at once. It seemed a little more for the readers then something that would actually occur in a real situation. While it was nice to get all that info, it made me lose some of the flow of the story. Like the details got lost in the words.

It wasn't too bad, just something you may want to consider doing a little more spread out next time.

I'm intrigued so far. The ideals are a bit of old fashioned rule mixed with a bit of modern aspects. It's actually really fun to watch you make it work.

I liked the fight scene, wasn't overblown, but not just skimmed over either.

I would like to know more about Kagome. What has made her who she is today (other then Sesshoumaru saving her life) and where she learned how to work her healing. I look forward to reading through this. <3

Yes!!!! Bring out the rum!!!!!

I liiike, I really liiike. The chapter as amazing and I absolutely can't wait for more. Please give me more, soon *puppy Sessh eyes*

And I absolutely adore the hard and unyealding Kagome, she rocks in this story. Though, you forgot to mention what happened to Kagura, did she leave with them or stayed in the hall?

~lily

Feel so sorry for Sasshomaru~! ^O^ Hope you update soon~! ^.^

Love it!!! .... Kagura vs Kagome, start! I wonder who'll come out the victor... Kags, of course, but I do wonder how you'll do it. There's going to be a lot of drama, Kagura's the type for it. 

the chapter was awesome, but Kagome has to start facing her father soon. She's not the type to take things lying down, even from relatives. Like catch his hand when he wants to hit her, or dodge.

~lily

ooooh, It was awesome XD ..... And I see the first signs of possessiveness in Kagura, things aren't gonna end well (+ she annoys me already).... 

The fighting scene was alright, though I tend to blank out on those parts (generally).... and the end was awesome, I think Kagome sparked something in Fluffy-sama ;P .... can't wait to see what's next

update as soon as you can, I'd love you for it XP

~lily

oooohhhh....you have a new fan haha...awesome fic so far, keep it up 

I find this story very interesting.  I really want to know what will happen in the fight and after.  Hope to see a new chapter soon.  Keep up the great work.