Reviews for Miko no Makimono by cakeiton

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insomniac_amy (Chapter 13) - Mon 08 Aug 2011

This chapter was so good. I think it was important for Kagome and Inuyasha to work out most of thier problems before they go back.  Haha Sesshoumaru is too funny. It's almost like he's straddling the fence on how he feels about Kagome. Then at the end where he is watching about the World War on TV and already planning on how he can compete against such an attack.

I wonder if Kagome is going to be able to get in touch with Anka before she leaves and if so will he warn her about what might be going to happen. I really feel like he knows. I also kinda have a feeling that she will be meeting a much younger Anka in the past. 

Thanks for the awsome chapter and I am really looking forward to the next one!


Kamiki (Chapter 13) - Mon 08 Aug 2011

I love this story! I was eagerly awaiting this chapter & it did not disappoint. :)

I have loads of theories & I can't wait to see what happens next, thanks for the update!


insomniac_amy (Chapter 12) - Fri 05 Aug 2011

Aww no spanking :(   LOL.  Lucky for Kagome that they didn't cause too much damage in the city. I can only imagine what she would have done to them if they had.    I wonder what is causing Kagome's pain? What kind of answers does Sesshoumaru want from Inuyasha? Again so many questions. I can't wait for the next chapter!!!

I love your portrayal of Sesshoumaru. You manage to bring just the right amount of arrogance and aloofness that we all love about him.

Thanks for another great chapter!


insomniac_amy (Chapter 11) - Mon 01 Aug 2011

Can't believe I missed this update!  Wow poor Sesshoumaru! He's just had one culture shock after another. Looks like him and Inuyasha are really going to be in trouble if Kagome finds out about all the fighting they did.

Thanks for the chapter! I can't wait for the next one.


Blaire (Chapter 10) - Tue 26 Jul 2011

Very interested to see where you take this. :)


insomniac_amy (Chapter 10) - Mon 25 Jul 2011

Wow! So much going on in this chapter!  I laughed when I was reading the part where Sess was thinking what a "burden" it was to know her! I love how you phrased this "it seemed whenever this time-traveling miko was involved she brought time-consuming quests and peril in her wake. It was almost a burden to know her; she was as troublesome as the fate before her."  LOL He would think that.

Again left with so many questions! When did she write that. What exactly will her part in the coming war be. I have a feeling that she is the weapon that will be bestowed against the child miko. Then there is still the questions about who Anka is. I think I know, but I'm sure you will probably end up suprising me! This is turing into a really great mystery.

Oh no! Sesshoumaru loose on Tokyo! Wonder what kind of trouble he will get into, and poor Inuyasha it looks like he will be eating some serious dirt!

Thanks for another great chapter. I can't wait for the next!

 


Ashes (Chapter 10) - Sun 24 Jul 2011

oh boy, Sesshy in the city. I wonder what kind of havok you'll come up for that.

And I'm really pulled in by Anke, part of me thinks I know what he is, another part of me thinks you're trying to trick me.


joyouki (Chapter 5) - Fri 15 Jul 2011

LMAO...When Sess said he didn't want to be purified embracing Inu...god that was funny... Love the story


insomniac_amy (Chapter 9) - Wed 13 Jul 2011

Hehehe barely greeted one another and already Kagome and Inuyasha are at each others throats. I really liked your portrayal of Sesshoumaru in this chapter. I loved the beginning where he is annoyed and unhappy with his "new found habit of runnning into pissed off mikos" LOOL  I also liked Kagome's internal dialog about wanting to pet Sesshoumaru's Mokomoko.

OMG! Sess let the cat out of the bag about Inuyasha's child. Looks like Kagome didn't know about that.

Hmmm and the plot thickens.... the scroll is open I can't wait to find out what's inside!

Thanks for another great chapter! Can't wait for the next one.


insomniac_amy (Chapter 8) - Sun 03 Jul 2011

Once again you have left me with many questions (in a good way of course :D)  So the young miko that tried to kill Inuyasha and Sesshomaru is the one calling herself the mother of all ningen....interesting. I wonder what she meant when she said “The youkai will suffer for removing the blessings of Amaterasu from my line.” Was she referring to the fact that a half demon fathered a child with a miko or is there a deeper meaning? I can't wait to find out!

OMG Inuyasha's son???? His mother a miko? Really makes me wonder who his mother. Now my poor little brain is working overtime trying to figure it out and coming up with all kinds of crazy idea's LOL 

You are doing a wonderful job with this. I find myself thinking about it even when I'm not reading it.

Thank you for keeping me entertained with your awesome writing!


insomniac_amy (Chapter 7) - Fri 01 Jul 2011

Poor Kagome... what a horrible memory. 

You did such a good job writing her fear when she felt the two youkai auras. Even though I knew who they were my heart was still pounding as I read. Then the actual horror of being confronted by none other than Inuyasha, that was probably as bad as the fear of the unknown.

I'm still curious what Anka meant when he said to her "Wish I could say the same" I have a strong feeling that he is somehow connected to her in more than just an employee/friend relationship.

Great work. Can't wait for the next chapter!


Sora (Chapter 6) - Tue 28 Jun 2011

Ah, story gets more and more interesting!

“If a miko could have him running, then time travel was surely a possibility.” Oh, that was a good one!

Can`t wait for the next chapter!


insomniac_amy (Chapter 6) - Tue 28 Jun 2011

LOOOL barely out of the well house and Inuyasha is already eating dirt! Love it!  Wow Sess sure is pissed.

Not very much happening in this chapter but I still liked it. Can't wait for the next and hopefully they will finally be reunited with Kagome?

Great chapter!


insomniac_amy (Chapter 5) - Wed 22 Jun 2011

Hmmm. That little miko has some serious issues. I wonder what the connection is with the purple flowers and what her background is. At least she thinks she purified them.

Leave it to Sess to be worried about being purified while "being embraced by a hanyou. lol

Great chapter!


insomniac_amy (Chapter 4) - Sat 18 Jun 2011

Another awsome chapter! The suspense is killing me. I am so curious to find out Anka's secrets. He's so mysterious and I can't help but think that he is connected to Kagome in a more personal way than just a friend. I really loved the part when he said

“Most who speak constantly babble nonsense. I have never heard you voice anything idiotic or trivial, even with all of your… talking.”  LOL What a polite way to say you talk to much.  He really reminds me of Sess. 

Then his "warning" at the end about wishing he could say that she shouldn't be afraid of him..... I wonder what he meant by that.  

Great work. Can't wait for Ch. 5 :)


insomniac_amy (Chapter 3) - Fri 17 Jun 2011

Aaawww poor Hojo. I thought it was funny too when she said "Honey" :D

 


insomniac_amy (Chapter 2) - Wed 15 Jun 2011

Another great chapter! I enjoyed reading this so please don't take this comment as a flame, but I was a little confused when the story skipped from present day Kagome to what I am going to assume is Inuyasha's feudal Japan? 

 So many questions... I wonder what Hana is up to and what trouble it will mean for Sess and the gang. I love a good mystery and this one is promising to be just that. Can't wait for the whole story so all the mysteries will be revealed :)


insomniac_amy (Chapter 1) - Wed 15 Jun 2011

Nnnnoooooo!!! Don't re-write! Write new chapters! LOL. Ok, I think I'm done with my little rant :D      I read this and really liked it so I went and read what you originally had posted and can't wait to find out what happens. Really good story so far.

 


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