next chapter please
Keep it coming.
Great story, please update soon.
you do know your not allowed to have AN-chapters on dokuga right?
awww what a mess update soon please! i would love to read more!(:
I like your story very much. I like the circumstance Kagome finds herself in and how she cleverly goes about fixing it. I think that the revelation of Kagome's love was a little rushed. Other than that I think you have a good story.
lmao @ inuyasha =x one of the few times i like the mutt!
That was awesome even though Inuyasha is the one who put her in this perdicament and he knows it, i love how yelled for kagome to kick the ex mistresses ass lmao quickly post another of your exellecnt chapters!
Lovely chapter! I truly enjoy this story, more updates please!
Is the red eyed man sesshy? Naraku is dead, so it must be him. As far as the lemon is concerned, It should take place in his chamber,making it official that they are lovers and he was meant to be with her!
I love your new chappie! Your announcement of her new position was a stroke of genius! It is true Myouga is Sesshy's messenger, in many stories, like "Dominance" where he gets a message from Inuyasha needing help! I am glad she took him up on his offer, she really had no choice based on the eras way of dealing with women mating already mated men , even if they don't know it!
lol, nice idea of the alcohol, kudos to your genuis ideas.
excellent chappie! I hope she finds happines in her new position!
Definitely better with the spacing. Great Job on thes econd chapter. Keep up the good work.
Kouga should find him, and smell kagome on him, and then maybe THEN i'll feel like that might be enough.
o.o inuyasha should have his butt handed to him!
I am quite interested to say the least. I found it hard to read though as everything was just pushed together. If you dont mind can you please seperate paragraphs and the talking text.
For example.
Paragraph
"Talking"
Thank you ^.^ I wish to read more
Will she accept his offer? It may be the only way!
It's not a bad start to the story. There are a few sentence structure and capitalization errors, but most importantly you have to sepearte the paragraphs more. The story so far is written as two big walls of text which tend to turn away a lot of readers upon sight. Separate the scenes more and make a few grammar changes and you should be fine.
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