rose (Chapter 10) - Wed 18 Sep 2013

next chapter please


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 10) - Sun 24 Jun 2012

Keep it coming.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 9) - Sat 26 May 2012

Great story, please update soon.


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 10) - Mon 21 May 2012

you do know your not allowed to have AN-chapters on dokuga right?


Anonymous (Chapter 9) - Sun 04 Sep 2011

awww what a mess update soon please! i would love to read more!(:


Kitsune Diva (Chapter 9) - Sat 03 Sep 2011

I like your story very much. I like the circumstance Kagome finds herself in and how she cleverly goes about fixing it. I think that the revelation of Kagome's love was a little rushed. Other than that I think you have a good story.


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 7) - Sat 23 Jul 2011

lmao @ inuyasha =x one of the few times i like the mutt!


Cheongsa (Chapter 7) - Fri 22 Jul 2011

That was awesome even though Inuyasha is the one who put her in this perdicament and he knows it, i love how yelled for kagome to kick the ex mistresses ass lmao quickly post another of your exellecnt chapters!


amy (Chapter 5) - Fri 08 Jul 2011

Lovely chapter! I truly enjoy this story, more updates please!


amy (Chapter 4) - Fri 01 Jul 2011

Is the red eyed man sesshy? Naraku is dead, so it must be him. As far as the lemon is concerned, It should take place in his chamber,making it official that they are lovers and he was meant to be with her!


amy (Chapter 3) - Mon 27 Jun 2011

I love your new chappie! Your announcement of her new position was a stroke of genius! It is true Myouga is Sesshy's messenger, in many stories, like "Dominance" where he gets a message from Inuyasha needing help! I am glad she took him up on his offer, she really had no choice based on the eras way of dealing with women mating already mated men , even if they don't know it!


Dawn of Roses Kiss (Chapter 3) - Tue 14 Jun 2011

mew (Chapter 3) - Tue 14 Jun 2011

lol, nice idea of the alcohol, kudos to your genuis ideas.


amy (Chapter 2) - Fri 10 Jun 2011

excellent chappie! I hope she finds happines in her new position!


TruGemini (Chapter 2) - Fri 10 Jun 2011

Definitely better with the spacing. Great Job on thes econd chapter. Keep up the good work.


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 2) - Fri 10 Jun 2011

Kouga should find him, and smell kagome on him, and then maybe THEN i'll feel like that might be enough.


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 1) - Fri 10 Jun 2011

o.o inuyasha should have his butt handed to him!


BlackInuPup (Chapter 1) - Thu 09 Jun 2011

I am quite interested to say the least. I found it hard to read though as everything was just pushed together. If you dont mind can you please seperate paragraphs and the talking text.

 

For example.

Paragraph

"Talking"

 

Thank you ^.^ I wish to read more


amy (Chapter 1) - Thu 09 Jun 2011

Will she accept his offer? It may be the only way!


TruGemini (Chapter 1) - Thu 09 Jun 2011

It's not a bad start to the story. There are a few sentence structure and capitalization errors, but most importantly you have to sepearte the paragraphs more. The story so far is written as two big walls of text which tend to turn away a lot of readers upon sight. Separate the scenes more and make a few grammar changes and you should be fine.


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