Lol ok i dont mind my nickname being shortened to Jug lol a few of my friends online call me that lol. Any who great chapter I never doubted Sesshomaru-sama for a minute I KNEW he would get Kagome out of there before Naraku did too much damage lol I just didnt know how long it would take for Sesshomaru to get outta his restraints! Wonderful chapter! I actually think it was my favorite so far just because of how Sesshomaru and Kagome acted toward eachother! AND I was SHOCKED that InuYasha came into the story so soon but I bet you have some twist to throw in to make it even MORE interesting than it already is! Keep up the great work!
YAY! Great update! =] I'm so glad you didn't let Naraku get his way with Kagome.
I can't wait to read your next update I really wanna read how Inuyasha fits in your story and how Sesshomaru and Kagomes' relationship will progress. Especially with ihis ex-betrothed around and working with Naraku!!
Great job!! XD =] ;)
Nikki (Chapter 5) - Thu 16 Jun 2011
Ok read the first 5 chapters and I love it!! Got a little confused about who's who but I got it. At the end of chapter 5 I yelled no because I noticed there were no more chapters.... PLEASE POST SOON!! lol ^_^
toni (Chapter 4) - Thu 16 Jun 2011
wow! 2 updates in one week! you r amazing! :)
megan007 (Chapter 2) - Thu 16 Jun 2011
I was wondering when you were going to update LOL good chapter so far.
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megan007
Hah! And so it begins with the unity of brothers. Nice!
I believe Naraku has a death wish.... Yep, definitely a death wish.
So, some of the designs of the web are showing in detail. We have the traitor Sukimi whom Sess was to mate, we see how Naraku planend the spell to work, and we see that Sess is quite the possessive one. Love it! Kags tru nature will continue to shine through. I have a feeling that stubborn streak of hers will cause great changes.
All I can say is WOW! I usually don't read AU but your summary caught my interest and I decided to give it a shot and I am very glad that I did. Your writing pulled me in and kept my interest. I like the plot line and your descriptive writing.
I like that Sess was able to break Naraku's control over him and I enjoyed the part where he grooms her, it was so sweet. I look forward to updates :)
Nykita (Chapter 4) - Thu 16 Jun 2011
um...I will skip the next chapter and read the reviews first lol If there is rape I'm outta here O.O
I hate rape and I hope Sess will break his binds ans save Kagome.
You have deffinetly kept my interest in this story strong! I hope Sess can save Gome before Naraku rapes her... Any way I cannot wait to read your next chapter keep up the wonderful work and keep writing with ur elaberate details neh? good job u rock btw :)
Jay_chAn (Chapter 4) - Thu 16 Jun 2011
I cannot wait for another update! Your story caught my attention from the very beggining :) I hope you update soon 'cause I can;t wait to read what happens next!
xxkayukixx (Chapter 4) - Thu 16 Jun 2011
I absolutely love the plot of this story! I can't wait for your next update!
Naraku is practically asking for it... Sesshoumaru is gonna tear him to bits. : )
Fifi (Chapter 3) - Tue 14 Jun 2011
It's been a long time since I've read anything decent, and I'm really intrigued by your plot! Will it only be Kagome and Sesshomaru, or will Inuyasha make an entrance too?
MARQUISHA (Chapter 3) - Mon 13 Jun 2011
Can't wait to read more!!
You are deffinetly keeping my interest in this story... I like where this is going so far and would love to read more :) keep up the great work! whoop whoop!!!!
no one (Chapter 2) - Thu 09 Jun 2011
Usually I dont bother with AU but after reading Of Slaughter and Salvation I gave in. So far it looks really good.
But please dont neglect your other story :)
Nykita
Quite interesting indeed. I have a feeling that the Kami of Life will not have as much control over Kagome as he thinks. A battle of wills she can surely win.
intriguing. please update soon
curioius...very curious... continue soon im curious as to where this story is going
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