I like your story. I the idea of the fan. I hope that you both will continue the story one day. It is well written.

Yup, yup ..... I enjoyed this .... And you can't even tell it's written by two different people XD ... Pls, update as soon as you can 

~lily

Terrific chapter! Such a beautifully told story! I really love the way you've written the characters.  Inu deserves to be banished and I hope now both Sesshoumaru and Kagome start to see each other in a different light! Perhaps more than just friends!

I love the way each chapter flows together. It is truly beautiful. Thank goodness someone finally put Inuyasha where he needs to be...away!!!! Now for more secret words. Truly Lovely!

So Sweet! So touching! bring them together , they deserve each other!

This is a very interesting story so far. At least Kagome will find true love in Sesshomaru. Hopefully, wherever Inuyasha ends up, he'll learn to appreciate what he's lost; his family, his friends and his home. It's messed up that he's now basically banished from Japan and not just the Western Lands, but he put himself in this situation. I look forward to reading more of this story.

*giggles self silly* i LOVES this! inuyasha's really an asshat too, i seriously hope he realizes just how EFed up he is.

I am so loving this story... Hurry and post more.. Pretty please... With cookies on top?

I'm so smashingly in love with this, both of you have just made my day with it ^_^ so awesome!

OMFG i LOVE this!  LOVE So are you posting chapter 2? i think you should both post the chapters like her post all on FFN, and you post all on Dokuga. this is amazing! and i'm already wanting more!

Great start! I'm looking forward to reading more. Sounds like it will be a very romantic story (well, other than the Inuyasha part!). I wonder why Sesshou would be using English to write to Kagome, though. Is he aware of her origins in this story? Or maybe he at one point saw her studying an English book when she was still in school?

Keep up the good work! :D

~~Ooooo I am looking forward to this! :D

Wow! This is beautifully begun! So far it feels very realistic to following the end of -what I know of- the cannon. I love the way you worked in the Bard and using English on the fan. I can see that later being a potential clue for Kagome once she begins to think about it, for how many people could she possibly know that would have any access to English much less be able to read it?

Thanks so much for writing!

Great start can't wait to see were you take it!!