very good short fanfic. i liked it. 

That turned out lovely and I enjoyed it alot. Great work.

I think this was a lovely story and would have loved to know a bit more that happens after this.Perhaps a small one shot sequel can be in order??

Aww man, was that the end. This story was awesome but way too short. It was an awesome idea to me and I can't but help feel a little sad that it ended so soon. If this isn't the end please update soon.

cute

Just as beautiful the second time.

yEy! i love happily ever afters!

she's a good miko toher sad puppy

awe! poor puppy~!

stalker puppy!

what and angry puppy he is!

you tell him girl! Repugnant!

oh dirty pool old man!

O_O temper temper puppy!

oh! :\