Reviews for Unexpected by AmaViarra

LoveAndFaith (Chapter 15) - Wed 16 May 2012

Keep it coming, Happy Mothers Day!


Venita (Chapter 14) - Mon 13 Feb 2012

Love the story, My Dad's home from the hospital after being there for a week and some days, for having a stroke he's doing well he was discharge from the hosiptal wednesay night, he will have to go to rehab for six weeks since his mind is not a little too good, and for some other things. I'm glad he's home and, thursday was my Birthday. Tonight we celebrated our Pastor wife birthday her birthday is the smae date as me, It was a great celebration and I had fun.


1CarinoInu (Chapter 14) - Sun 12 Feb 2012

Of course he would find a "use" for his daughter.  What a jerk!  He makes several attempts to off the little tike, poisons her and now he wants to use her in some fashion?  When Kagome discovers this, I don't think she'll like it.

I remember this story from when you originally posted - wasn't it submitted for the "I didn't know I was pregnant" challenge?  Anyway, loved it then, love it now...and the new name for the baby.

I look forward to seeing how you manage to bring Sesshomaru and Kagome together.  It looks to be a long developing relationship!


WiccanMethuselah (Chapter 1) - Sun 12 Feb 2012

A most interesting and intriguing story... I look forward to seeing where you take it from here!  It is understandable that Sesshoumaru would be more interested in his pride than the offspring of an encounter that he didn't even remember having - almost more understandable than him saving Rin.  After all, he could explain away his association with Rin as the "experiment" with Tenseiga, but that's not so easy with a half-breed pup with his scent.  Congratulations on making Sesshoumaru so believable in this story - I am eagerly anticipating how you manage to get him to redeem himself for this one!!

;D

~~Wiccan~~


tetralis (Chapter 13) - Sun 05 Feb 2012

That was an all time low for Sesshoumaru, killing of a defenseless pup, his own child none the less, and if that's not enough, in a heartless cruel way and for what, to protect his stupid reputation! He's willing to carry around the burden of a human child, one that's not even his, who's 100 times weaker than poor little Kaiya even in her pup status, and who's fate had been to die. Instead he decides his own child deserves death and from such a cowardly way too. He's no better than Naraku. He's such a hypocrite, Rin is from the race he claims to hate; humanity for which he forsakes little Kaiya for. What a real bastard you've made Sess here. I hope you make him pay for that later in your story.


Lyss (Chapter 12) - Thu 02 Feb 2012

Ah! Sesshoumaru's a jerk!! :( I feel really bad for Kaiya :/ I can't wait for another update! i love the story! :) thanks for writing!


Lyss (Chapter 5) - Thu 02 Feb 2012

Hi, I'm enjoying your story so far! I'm looking forward to finding out why Sesshoumaru has no idea! O.o I wasn't expecting that! lol :) Thanks for writing! :D


snowbird (Chapter 2) - Thu 16 Jun 2011

Mentally, I'm already used to Ciel as her name.  But if you don't want to keep it, maybe use a feminine version of Maru like Marusa.  This may not be Japanese because I don't speak the language.  If not, I like one of your choices - Kaiya.

I hope you still plan to keep to the original plot of what Sesshoumaru had planned for Ciel.  It kept me on my toes wondering if he would actually do it.  I'm not going into detail because of your first time readers, but I'm sure you know what I'm talking about.


snowbird (Chapter 1) - Sun 12 Jun 2011

I know you've posted this story before but I don't remember which site because it's been awhile.  You were several chapters into it because I remember what happens which I'll not say here to give away what you've not revealed yet.  Just that the plot is exciting and I hope that this time you keep adding to it and not stop like the last time.  Please don't disappoint me this time.  I'm excited you've brought back this story.


Kristale (Chapter 1) - Tue 31 May 2011

Interesting... I would like to see where you go with this... -Kristale


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