Wow, I loved this story! I was just so taken in by the whole thing! Love love love!
Wow... simply. WOW. At first, I honestly believed this would just be another smut story -- having completely forgotten, obviously, that it was 30-some odd chapters long -- and then it morphed into something so much more. Depiste how fast Kagome seemd to fall into being in love with Seeshoumaru, you didn't truly rush it as it would have felt perhaps if someone without your skill were to have written this story. I loved the way you embodied Sesshoumaru perfectly. Never, in all the years I've been reading fanfiction have I ever found someone to embody what I feel to be the essence of his personality so perfectly, so beautifully. Even when he came to terms with caring for Kagome, perhaps even loving her, you still managed to keep him in character despite the feelings he had that would have seen him being otherwise. Fantastic read. I will definitely be searching out the sequel (since I came across it first on the home page and decided it best to read this one first). Cannot wait to read the follow up. Again, beautiful job. I will definitely be checking out your other stories.
And for the love of all that is holy take your talents off fanfiction! I would happily pay 30 bucks for a first edition hardcover of some story you published. The world is in DIRE need of author's capable of conveying emotions and thoughts and expressions in words like you are. Truly, you took my breath away with this story..... and I have succeeded in beating a dead horse, I believe. So I shall end this.
Look for more reviews from me at the finish of your others stories. I have definitely added you to the favorite authors list. Blessed be.
~Rindalyn Kane
The story was amazing, awesome and I enjoyed it! Happy New Year!
Nope, still mad at Inu no Taicho.
Maybe I misread the early chapters but it seemed to me that Sesshomaru understood Kagome's worth. He knew that he did her wrong by asking her to be his F-buddy. And in his own way, Sesshomaru tried to rectify the situation by letting her go. He just didn't know how to go about it. Honestly, I don't think it was Sesshomaru's fault that he's emotionally constipated. Granted, Sesshomaru's hate against ALL mankind is excessive but still. The guy is still going through the grieving process. From first hand experience, I can say that grieving takes a long time to pass.
Inu nu Taicho shouldn't have meddled. Its obscene that he'd try. First, he had no right to bring in an innocent third party into the situation. Second, he had no right in invading their private moments. Third, like freaking uh-duh Sesshomaru feels gulit for Kagome's pain. Sesshomaru knows he's to blame but at the same time none of this would have happened if Inu no Taicho hadn't gotten Kagome involved. I believe Sesshomaru knows that they are both to blame.
Sorry for the rant but I just had too. *blushes*
Again, awesome job! ^-^
My thought as i was reading: "okay, wtf! Kagome, make up your mind! first you get mad at Sesshomaru for asking to being F-buddies. then when he agrees that he was wrong to ask, you get offended. Pick one or other! >:("
I love the angst though, thanks for sharing! ^-^
Haven (Chapter 38) - Thu 22 Mar 2012
Omg, omg, omg -- this story is just so good. There are lots of decent/good stories but yours just has a way of entertaining as well. Sess giving his 'presentation' on why they would be good rutting partners was just laugh out loud. So very nerdy of him. I love your way with words -- so rich and descriptive and really satisfying. And the smut....good god!! I'm so excited about the sequel which I'm starting toot sweet. I feel like I hit the jackpot in Vegas when I saw that you have other 'completed' stories. Please continue doing what you do bc you are so talented. Thank you!!!!
Lyss (Chapter 38) - Tue 21 Feb 2012
I love this story and now I must start onto the sequel! :) thanks for writing! :D
I have this feeling that Kagome is always going to be second guessing these mysterious feelings she keeps getting in the future. Congratulations on your award from the Feudal Association. You deserve every award you win, my dear friend. Your stories are a work of art and your writing is like poetry.
Now on to the next of your fics I've missed. JEN
wow, this was totally hottttt!!! You do have such a way with words, my dear girl. Oh, how I've missed reading these fics! I'm so sorry for getting so behind. JEN
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