Ikaru (Chapter 1) - Thu 23 Apr 2009
it was short and very sweet, but your capitalization needed some work, i got a little confused a couple of times on where the sentences began, and you used 'u' for 'you,' this is nothing a little proofing won't cure. Now that my constructive criticism is over: i really enjoyed reading this and i hope you got over you writers block!!

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