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Reviews for Retribution by MissTeak

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Geisha Tactics (Chapter 7) - Tue 04 Apr 2017

This is so good! I need more!


Koree (Chapter 7) - Mon 03 Nov 2014

This Story Is Scary As Hell 0.0 , I Made The Mistake Of Starting To Read It Late At Night Instead Of Waiting Till Light Was Out D; I Have To Go Downstairs & Wash Dishes & I Cannor Find It In Me To Leave My Room Because Of This Story :( It's Amazing & I Love It So Far But I Am Terrified Lol & I'm Trying To Ease My Way Into Going Downstairs Anywho Your Story Is Great :)


Vibrio (Chapter 1) - Thu 03 Nov 2011

An absolutely amazing storyline, you've got me sitting at the edge of the chair in nail-biting suspense!!!! I really hope you update, such an amazing story!!!

 


DragynWyllow (Chapter 1) - Sun 17 Jul 2011

Holy cow! I've complimented many fanfic writers.... But you..... You MissTeak... Are THEE most awesome(est) non-published writer whose works I've ever had the pleasure of reading!! And I read a fair amount if my apartment were anything to go by. I've read a few of your other works, but I'm completely in love with Retribution atm and.... Holy flipping cow I dunno what to say. I've actually never get to "meet" someone such as yourself, never mind have many samples of the artist herself to enjoy. Your fanfictions are........ immersible! I fall into them like I fall into Harry Potter (and I've grown up with the series) or any of Stephen King's books. Your horror is impeccable! (Not to mention your grammar and mechanics are quite spot on.) I spend less time mentally trying to fix the work than actually enjoying the work and this is what I love most about your writing. There is enough info and description as well as getting on with the actual story.

On top of all this, you're writing about my favourite(est) pairing ever! Their interactions are so realistic I have a hard time reminding myself they were never together in the series. You mess wit mah brein!

I've been writing for the last twelve years... and well... I've finally have someone I can look up. I dont' have anything published because I can never finish a story so I've been trying to work on it and you've become my inspiration!

Keep up the good work~!


Rachel (Chapter 7) - Fri 15 Jul 2011

oh reading this in the drark just gives me the creeps! Update sooner!


ashley (Chapter 7) - Mon 11 Jul 2011

It took me a while to read this, but I'm super excited I did! Again, I LOVED LOVED LOVED that chapter! Will Shippo remember what happened when he wakes up? oh please update soon!

On another note, is Naraku the vengeful spirit and kikyo just trapped with him? hmm, I wonder...


emerald skye (Chapter 7) - Sat 09 Jul 2011

Miss Teak, as much as I adore and lurv your loveable Chibimaru and the feuding neighbors, this tale of yours really shows your true strength in drawing the reader in and weaving a complex story. The plot is absolutely amazing, and believe it or not (and I actually hate to say this because I DO love getting Chibi updates), whenever I see THIS one has updated, I get all riled up and the anticipation rapidly builds. Maybe it's because I'm a sucker for the damsel-in-distress, supernatural tales, but whatever it is, I'm completely hooked. 

Finally, Sesshoumaru is starting to take her seriously now that he has 'proof' that it's not all in her mind. But poor Kags and Shippo!!! I can't wait to see what he says when he wakes up (if that's any time soon...) In the meantime, it looks like Sess is now gonna be Kagome's protector and maybe she'll be able to achieve some sort of peace....


rss (Chapter 7) - Sat 09 Jul 2011

poor shippo.

the bath tub scene in the last chapter was so scary...

and now sesshoumaru is moving in !

i feel good about that.

safe...

er..

can't wait to read ahead!


yasurei (Chapter 7) - Sat 09 Jul 2011

I really thought that she would see something as she was looking into the mirror. I can´t tell you how many supernatural stories I know from real-life people who always swore they saw someone in the mirror after having the feeling that someone was near but when they turned into that direction they saw nothing.


Zyren (Chapter 7) - Sat 09 Jul 2011

This fic is legitimately creepy. I made the mistake of getting ready for bed and then reading this chapter and I keep glancing over my shoulder into the dark room to make sure im still alone. even the slight buzzing of my fan overhead is freaking me out right now. You're doing a really great job of setting the tone of the story and the emotional turmoil and stress of the characters. I look forward to the next chapter. Now though im going to see if i can find one of my old nightlighs before I turn in lol


JessiCeleste89 (Chapter 7) - Fri 08 Jul 2011

Whoa!!!! Awesome story!! I miss reading your stories. I need to start coming back on this site again. Thanks for a great story! Your Awesome!!


Luna (Chapter 7) - Fri 08 Jul 2011

Woooo I love this story!!


Trelweny Rosephoenixwolf (Chapter 7) - Fri 08 Jul 2011

If he's going to get to the bottom of the mystery AND keep his reputation Sesshomaru had better find a way to prove the supernatural exists,

I love how he noticed the direction of the hold from the bruises on Kagome's arms. Awesome detailing.

Please let Shippou be okay! *whimpers*

Thanks so much for writing!


Misaki (Chapter 7) - Fri 08 Jul 2011

All I can say is... wow.  Intriguing! 


Freya Ishtar (Chapter 7) - Fri 08 Jul 2011

I'm really enjoying how this is turning out- I've been on an Asian supernatural horror moive bender the last few days, so this fit in perfectly XD.

Glad we're getting to see a chink in Sesshomaru's armor . . . he's being stubborn, sure, but that's the Sessh we all know and love, he'll come around at some point, I'm sure.

I am a little sad that you're prediciting this to be 20 chapters, this is the kind of story I could personally handle being really long, but you're keeping everything moving at a quick, steady pace, so it makes sense that it won't be overly long. 

Can't wait for you to update! *hugs* :)


rss (Chapter 6) - Tue 05 Jul 2011

OMG what does she see?!?!?


(Chapter 6) - Mon 04 Jul 2011

Oh my god, talk about intense! I loved it. I'm not one for this sort of thing, but you have a way of making it SOOO fascinating! 


Saraniya (Chapter 6) - Mon 04 Jul 2011

I put off reading it until the sun was out because everytime I read the updates at night I creep myself out... Loved the chapter I haven't been this on edge in a long time!


Luna (Chapter 6) - Mon 04 Jul 2011

Cliffie!!!!!! <3<3<3 I luffs you anyways!


sara (Chapter 6) - Mon 04 Jul 2011

Oh come one, there was no need to stop right there as the story is exciting enough. I´ll never understand why so many writers think it´s funny or think it´s more exciting to stop at the peak of a chapter, it´s rather unprofessional. Have you ever read a book were the author stoped at a critical point? I didn´t and I hope I never will. *sigh* Well, I hope you´ll update soon.


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