I literally went through convulsions on my seat reading this delectable piece of literature. And it is. Literature, I mean.
Loved everything about it; brilliant.
My hands are literally shaking. I'm staring at them and they are shaking. I usually read on my phone instead of my computer but as I held it, I couldn’t use the touch screen correctly or see things straight because they were shaking as I held my phone...is that normal? That's what I get for staying up all night and deciding to read. I was smacked into next week by such greatness.
Go bold Kagome! She is so dominant, I've never seen it before, well like this. I was a little startled once everything hit…… hot and heavy, and Sesshoumaru joined in, not in the way I expected; it turned into volcanic and substantially heavier, like 1000tons heavy. I thought Kagome was going to be in the middle, all >.> filled, but this version is just as… “raunchy” or is it “naughty” *blushes furiously* >.>…. Let’s stick with nice... yeahhhh, I suck at saying …”insert dirty word” things but I can read it :). At first I was disappointed and thought Sesshou may only want to “bleep” Kouga, but then I remembered you said it wasn't really that way, you know, after my brain caught up. A very “nice” chapter; I was sad that it ended but I figure if I’m a good little reader and got on the computer to review, I would be rewarded. Hopefully, not a month from now, but I can wait if necessary, pacing after a week, scowling after two, then twitching after three, and possibly walking the border of insanity after four… just to put that out there.
--KD
Kayelyn (Chapter 3) - Wed 21 Mar 2012
I have never been a fan of yaoi...until now! I FREAKING love this. That was incredible smexy. More, please?!
Mmmm this story is exactly what I've been needing! Very steamy, please update soon!!!
TT.TT I am so forgetful these past few days, that I've been forgetting to sign in before I review. ARGH. Please excuse me. ( ; The below review by Anonymous is all mines. :D I find the threesome hot, but since Sesshomaru is going to be paired up with Kagome, does that mean that him and Kouga are bi? No offence intended, of course, I'm merely curious. xD I'm definitely gonna be waiting for the next update. More lemony goodness to come, I presume? Hehe.
Anonymous (Chapter 3) - Tue 20 Mar 2012
Smutty, I like it. ( ; Btw, does this mean that Kouga and Sesshomaru are bi ? Hehehehehe...
One word: HOT!
"'Scuse me! Waiter! I'll have what their having." :D
Another great chapter. (gonna take a cold shower now)
*blinks* wow more aplease! besides they could miko sandwish, or they could have ses take kagome, he can have two mates right?
amy (Chapter 2) - Thu 26 Jan 2012
Wonderful chappie, more please!
one word ddddDAMN! A canine delight!! always the quiet ones...
l (Chapter 2) - Thu 26 Jan 2012
Wow.
starchilds (Chapter 2) - Thu 26 Jan 2012
WOW! You just HAVE to continue this. My wicked mind may get me in trouble one day but I jusy loved it!! Thanks, Starchilds
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