lol now i get to be the first to review for you :) ok where do i start, this story has alot of potential and i love what you are doing with it, and  i would like to continue to see updates for it, about your beta problem, i would love to take the job for you, im very thorough and i'm not one to do such things but i will do it for you, if you rather someone else thats ok, but at least update for me please, i want to see more chapters!!! :D

till we speak again,

KAR