Venita (Chapter 7) - Thu 15 Dec 2011

Great story, please update soon.


smitten kitten (Chapter 1) - Wed 08 Jun 2011

wow a younger Sesshomaru, such a great idea! Inuyasha is bound to like it LOL


TKE (Chapter 7) - Tue 07 Jun 2011

LMAO.....loved the end!!!!


GreyEcho (Chapter 6) - Tue 07 Jun 2011

;_; that was sheer torture. you ended the chapter there.  I really like your story, keep up the good work.


phoenixgodess75 (Chapter 5) - Tue 31 May 2011

i can't wait for the next chapter. love it.


amy (Chapter 5) - Mon 30 May 2011

He is halfway there when he is grown, now how is he going to achieve her heart as a youngster!


Ashley Brown (Chapter 5) - Mon 30 May 2011

I still love that line, "but having a creepy white kids effect." Nice to see your story here on Dokuga. Sharing any others?


jojo661538 (Chapter 4) - Fri 27 May 2011

uhm chapter 4 is repeated twice in the same chapter just letting you know other than that keepup the great work i really enjoyed reading you story ^_^


Hibikari (Chapter 4) - Thu 26 May 2011

Um o.o just letting you know that you double posted the story. :D totally loving it btw ;)


amy (Chapter 3) - Wed 25 May 2011

He needs to fall in love, undying love, maybe Kagome could be the one?


Sessygurl (Chapter 2) - Wed 25 May 2011

I think its so cute that he got jealous of Shippo and Rin and how he wanted to cuddle with Kagome too.


Diane (Chapter 1) - Sat 21 May 2011

After I read this chapter I went to FFN & got the whole thing, I'm enjoying it but it does have some repeated goofs, your (belonging to you) instead of you're (a contraction of you are), I don't think you have a single instance where your is appropriate. Also unless you're talking about time then isn't the word you want it's than, than is the common usage. Also than is ratio related, then is time related. You could get a better explanation by googling for the difference & how to use the 2. Other than those 2 things & a few misspelled words here & there that's pretty much all I saw.


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