I love this story. I really do but I know what I'm about to say is going to be hella unpopular....I think I hate Sango, in this. She feels like the weakest link in this story to me and I would love by some awful twist of fate if she just got impaled on something and bleed out. Boo hiss she was cheated on, so two shakes later she's pouring all her insecurities into Inuyasha while clinging to him like the life line that will save her love life. All the while her 'sister' is some weird after thought that she kinda feels guilty over? On that I might be confused or just reading it wrong..basicly I feel that the Sango drama is weak. It takes away from all the interesting things happening in the story.

Everything else makes the story worth reading. The writer's overall flow feels heavy and warm. I love the chapter where Seeshomaru 'cleans house'. I love the light and dark elements of the story, they twist together nicely. The original characters are fun and very easy to love. or love\hate them. whichever...

...It's just the Sango drama I can live without. The brat in me hopes the author takes pity on me and just makes her litral dead weight. 

....Lyra if you are reading this just know I really do love this story and no matter what I want to see where all this is heading. It really is a good story.

Label me still confused. XD

Damn it, Sango! Just tell him how you feel!!! Had to leave this chapter with a cliffhanger! Oh, poo! ONWARD!!!!

So good, so good! 

So has Inuyasha accepted his demon side? Is that what's happening to him now? And what's happening back with Kagome and the babe? So many questions! I'm loving the updates, please don't stop. 

So much in such a shirt chapter. And the baby! Oh, but who water the watery grey veiled person near Sesshomaru and Miroku? And did Kagome's energy lash out like that to protect, or because it was attacking? Who put thos handprints on the woman's face? Was that breath because the sisters said Kagome would be The Mother of A Thousand Generations, and the baby is clearly hanyou? So many questions, but I'm glad he's all right. That's what matters. And Sessho is killing those disgusting soldiers. That's at least taken care of right now. Oh, the excitement.

Normally I don't read drabbles but this one caught my eye so I decided to check it out. I look forward to the next chapter.

So because Christmas just happened. Your author's note there at the end made me snigger because my first instinct was to correct it to, "For unto us a child is born, a son is given..."

I regret my distance from Dokuga. Because of it, I missed this gem of a story. I'll be following now, of course. 

I am so excited to see another chapter of Alpha! There is always a new twist, another surprise, a little hidden nook full of information and drama. You have such an incredible talent for the complexity of this story. Thank you for sharing your talent, and I look forward to the next chapter!

Happy New Year! Thank you for the amazing chapters!  No one does this pairing like you  Loving it!  Loving you!  And thanks for all the updates.

Figures the new couple would sneak away at a time when at least Sango would be useful. But maybe it's better that way. I'd ask for Miroku to kill those idiots, but I know that's not what he is. With any luck, Sesshomaru will storm in and behead the lot of them. 

Oh Kagome! She really has the worst timing! 

And Sesshomaru, hurry and help them out!

Thx for updating! 

LMFAO!!!! Miroku playing Inuyasha? Epic! Onward !!

Good Chapter  :)

LOL! Oh poor Kagome, her timing really isn't the best. And Miroku pretending to be Inuyasha is hilarious! Hopefully, the soldiers will fall back and not bother Kagome giving birth... I'm sure Sesshoumaru will be back soon and none to happy about this situation. It's interesting seeing Miroku come to grips with his new form and new powers; to see him struggle to not let his beast take over and to try to retain his humanity despite not being human anymore. 

I'm so happy for the recent updates on this story! 

Happy new years!

How surprised was I to see not one, but two updats yesterday? What a xmas gift. LOL 

Great chapters, as usual. I'm glad Kagome and Inuyasa's first talk wasn't explosive, and that they seem to come to an agreement. I'd assume that Sango got onto the roof and bosted/helped him up. Hoping that they'r not just together because they're miserable, but I guess you'll get to that later. 

What was that that Sesshomaru killed? Some type of fairy? Your description was both enough and not enough. Would it be too much to ask that Kagome not see any complications during the birth, and not need this mystery item at all? 

Such foreboding at the end of each chapter... Things are supposed to be settling for our group, aren't they??? 

Love it!

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Well, this is not good at all. We're supposed to be dealing with the friend issue. With Sango and Inuyasha running off into the forest and living in the dark, hiding from people. Throwing the emperor and his fear ridden tirade into this mess is not helpful to a pregnancy nor a newly cleansed/revised kingdom at all. 

What an ominous chapter! Kagome just can't take a breath  from evil plots dangers ahead!

Somehow this is like a quiet before the storm thing!

Just teased me! Thx for updating! I love it!

Omg, I love this story. This is one of the best stories I've read in a long time, couldn't stop reading. You make it feel like it's a full story and not short chapters.