Reviews for Alpha by Lyra

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Mynameishuman (Chapter 394) - Fri 30 Oct 2020

Oh. My. God.

There are...no words, yet SO many. Too many, perhaps.

This story was a spectacular piece of art. Incredible!


Mynameishuman (Chapter 244) - Wed 28 Oct 2020

There are moments - rare moments - during which you know from the very first sentence that it's going to be a good chapter...this chapter was one of those rare moments.

"Bow before her"

Pure gold.


Mynameishuman (Chapter 10) - Tue 27 Oct 2020

Oh my god. im in love with this chapter. 


Mynameishuman (Chapter 3) - Tue 27 Oct 2020

Holy crap! What is happening?! It's like edge of the seat enthralling :)


Mynameishuman (Chapter 1) - Tue 27 Oct 2020

Intriguing straight from the start. :)


Booklover (Chapter 257) - Wed 29 Jul 2020

I don't know if you are still checking these but I hope so. To be honest, at first I found the short chapters frustrating. However, they grew on me.  They are a great medium to showcase your talent for prose. Each reads like a beautiful poem tied together to create a masterpiece. And you write glorious lemons. Bravo!


Young Kagome (Chapter 394) - Sun 31 May 2020

Lovely story! I like how in depth you went with everyone's life, usually people just focus on Sess/Kag and everyone else is back burner or not mentioned at all. I got bored at the end with all the history talk, I'm not a fan unfortunately. So I don't think I want to read the sequel. I really did enjoy this story though! 


Pebbles (Chapter 258) - Mon 13 Apr 2020

I've never encountered a dancing Sesshomaru in all the fics I've read. Never would i think it could be pulled off. I think you did a very nice job of it. Still wild witout seeming off putting. 


Pebbles (Chapter 224) - Thu 09 Apr 2020

Loved how this played out. Battle ready, indeed.


Pebbles (Chapter 206) - Thu 09 Apr 2020

You could've just cslled this chapter "RELEASE THE SANGO!"   Krakens be damned!... O_O


Pebbles (Chapter 175) - Thu 09 Apr 2020

Oh man...that was just...just...*dies*

 

Geez


Pebbles (Chapter 156) - Wed 08 Apr 2020

How in tuned this chapter is to the ongoing, unrelenting virus that captures the world this very moment. We all have to be strong and fight. Instinctually,  bravely, passionately. 


Pebbles (Chapter 134) - Wed 08 Apr 2020

That gave me chills.  Oh sweet lord.... damn.


Pebbles (Chapter 125) - Wed 08 Apr 2020

I like that connection so much. Bout time Inuyasha got some sense knocked into him about their similarities. 


Pebbles (Chapter 119) - Wed 08 Apr 2020

Enjoying this slow change with the determined nature they are both showing towards their objectives. Highly interested to see how his mother returns to his life...


Mecca (Chapter 394) - Wed 18 Dec 2019

Ahh I loved it all! The ending with Sessh?maru taking on a new challenge with the biggest shit eating grin anyone has ever seen lol XD Loved this story. I'm very excited to read Omega, I mean, what more epic stuff is gonna happen?? Miroku turning into a peacock Y?kai just about took the cake, as far as originality goes. Thank you for that. Merry Christmas, Happy Holidays! <3


Mecca (Chapter 371) - Sun 15 Dec 2019

*TEARS* He seems to be the Inuyasha I first fell in love with... until I got a good eyeful of his brother >.> I love it! Inuyasha revival is 100% gold. 


Mecca (Chapter 286) - Fri 13 Dec 2019

I'm so totally late for the party. Meaning, this was written a while ago, and I'm only just... here. Does Sango and Inuyasha/Mamoru end up together? Because if that's happening, then woo! I'll put my stamp of approval for that any ol' day! and Thank you. Really. From the bottom of my heart for making it so Miroku and Sango don't have the usual boring ending of them marrying and having a bazillion spawn. I rather like this different path for them. I wish Sango got some form of revenge but I'm a vengeful beezy *shrugs* Onward! 


Mecca (Chapter 261) - Fri 13 Dec 2019

*Holds face in hands* Oh my god. You're a literal genius. For, like, literacy, because your write so well and stuff (I obviously do not). This: "...and now all that is meaningful has been torn out of him; he is wrecked on the shoals of memory that rise within him, unbidden." The inclusion of the prompt is so well done. I barely studied for my final today (this whole week, let's be real) because I couldn't stop reading through this Drabble series of yours. I know it's been written long ago but dang; thank you from the future! Haha... ah. *goes back to reading*


Mecca (Chapter 106) - Wed 11 Dec 2019

Waaaah, this is so good! Makes me wanna just cry and hug Shizuka at his open honesty, just adorbs. *sniffles*


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