Reviews for Alpha by Lyra

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Lauren (Chapter 354) - Wed 17 Jan 2018

Maybe Sesshomaru can control how imposing he looks? Or maybe he's like a cat and when he gets angry, he fluffs and appears to be much larger. LOL 

I almost forgot about Rin and Shippou, at home, no doubt causing havoc and making a mess while they play king and queen. Their Yoko must have her hands full. But they'll no doubt, be excited to see the baby and want to cuddle him. With any luck nothing fell into disarray and only paperwork has piled onto Sesshomaru's desk.

hw (Chapter 354) - Tue 16 Jan 2018

woohoo! another chapter! 

Soooo, since Inuyasha is human and therefore can't mate Sango to remove his tie to Kagome...will that be the thing that pushes him to accept his yokai half and desire to be hanyo again, thereby breaking the binding? It's really fun to guess what's going to happen or how things will play out...most times I'm wrong but when I'm right, I feel giddy. :D


Glad that Miroku is returning to the palace with them. Can't wait for the reunion with Shippo and Rin. And to see what people's reactions are to Masamitsu! 

Paperwing (Chapter 354) - Tue 16 Jan 2018

Sango can't always have what she wants. Life happens sometimes, and that's the way it goes. He did impart the insinuation if Inuyasha resumed his natural state, but will he really want to?

Treece (Chapter 353) - Mon 15 Jan 2018

I loved that Kagome and Seeshoumaru's son is a puppy! Brilliant!

Treece (Chapter 353) - Mon 15 Jan 2018

Wonderful updates! Loved every moment.  This is still my favorite story.  Thanks for all the new chapters and new revelations. Looking forward to more.

hw (Chapter 353) - Mon 15 Jan 2018

Woops! I meant strife not strive...heh.

hw (Chapter 353) - Mon 15 Jan 2018

Oh Kagome, why indeed. Why is there so much strive between yokai and humans and what are you going to do to lessen it, Mother of One Thousand Generations? 

Glad they're going back home and can't wait to see everyone's reactions. Will Miroku go back as well or will he go look for his mate? 


And what about Sango and Inuyasha? Will they get a chance to talk to Sesshoumaru before he leaves? Ack! So many questions! 


Thanks so much for another lovely chapter!

Paperwing (Chapter 353) - Mon 15 Jan 2018

I hope you have a safe trip! I'm not sure how that affects updates, but we'll be waiting!

Lorena (Chapter 352) - Sat 13 Jan 2018

I hope I'm not weird or alone in my opinion when I say that for some reason I found this chapter so romantic-

nicole (Chapter 352) - Sat 13 Jan 2018

I think we should draw a picture to go with this setting keep,up the void work

hw (Chapter 352) - Sat 13 Jan 2018

Another excellent chapter! Thanks so much for updating so soon. And we finally have his name! Masamitsu kinda just rolls off the tongue, nice. Its interesting that he needs blood and power...will he not need Kagome's milk because he's more yokai than human? 


Paperwing (Chapter 352) - Sat 13 Jan 2018

I'm totally imaging the puppy trying to run after giant daddy and faceplanting like a total goof. He might be greedy to be a big bad grown up hokay, but he's still a newborn. 

Lauren (Chapter 352) - Sat 13 Jan 2018

Another sweet family moment. I like his name. It'll fit, I'm sure. 

WiccanMethuselah (Chapter 351) - Wed 10 Jan 2018

Ah, escape from China for another chapter full of meaningful words... GOOD! No name for our little hybrid... BAD. I won't do it, but you know you will be hounded!! ;) Love that everyone else is questioning the pup's provenance - this should be interesting, and I will be waiting (patiently, of course) to see how that goes going forward!!! :D


hw (Chapter 351) - Wed 10 Jan 2018

Another chapter!! Yes! I'm so glad you managed to escape China to drop this bit of awesomeness on us. :) Its amusing watching Sesshoumaru slowly realizes the extent of change Kagome brings to his life. He's got her friends to contend with and not threaten to kill if he wants to keep her happy. hahaha! 

I was wondering if their son would be a "reverse" hanyo...have a hanyo night but the rest of the time yokai. Nice to have a hunch confirmed! So nice to see how happy and proud (with a bit of awe!) Sessh is with Kagome and their son. What's his name by the way? And I hope someone does a fanart of the happy lil family. A mini Sesshoumaru must be soooo cute! 


Lauren (Chapter 351) - Wed 10 Jan 2018

Hey! Another chapter! Color me surprised.


Of course Miroku brought attention to the most pertinent issue. Called attention to the possibility of what Sesshomaru and Kagome's son could be. I'm glad Miroku has Kagome to call his family, because I'm very sure he would've been driven mad by now. Here's hoping the baby will be a chance for them to bind more. 

shalisa davis (Chapter 351) - Wed 10 Jan 2018

I have spent the last two days reading and falling in love with this story. I can't wait to read more. I usually only read chapter stories but this one was able to catch my eye and keep my attention it is amazing

Natalia (Chapter 351) - Wed 10 Jan 2018

A true pleasure read as always. And this idea with transformation is amazing.

Thx for updating despite being busy. 

Paperwing (Chapter 351) - Tue 09 Jan 2018

Great update! No name yet thought! I like the idea of hanyou or perhaps human for one night of each month!

Lauren (Chapter 350) - Tue 09 Jan 2018

This was a sweet and entertaining chapter, if only because Kagome reacted exactly as I imagined, and Sesshomaru has been so open and expressive with her. Loved the funny feeding confusion you added. It does answer the question I had once the chapter began though.


Unfortunately, I feel like this was the last chapter we'd be getting from you for a long while. If that's the case, I hope you have a great Valentine's Day, April Fool's, and Fourth of July. Thanks for all of the theory-inducing chapters.

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