I love your story. It's good to finally see another update. However I do have a question; Is the sango and miroku helping sesshomaru get kagome back the same people from thier school. I am just a little confused by the way the chapter brought them into the situation. I am assuming they are but it just felt a little wierd for me. But really I have to say good job I am not alternate universe kind of person but I am loving your story and following it closely.
I feel that the story is going very well, I certainly look forward to more. If you're having trouble writing, maybe you can resolve the questions you've raised without too many chapters. Then if the mood hits you again, you can do a follow-up to flesh out some of the finer points or give an epilogue through flash backs or something. But, I really encourage you to continue your efforts.
I like your story,very much. Please update soon.
Tasha (Chapter 14) - Fri 24 May 2013
Oh please do continue soon. I do love this story.
Eeee! you can't let us hanging! *insert kick in the bum here* ;)
Ohhhhh .... Another one please?
interesting and can't wait for more!! keep up the good work and good luck!!
mari (Chapter 13) - Tue 05 Mar 2013
thanks for the update loved it.
Ldymidnight (Chapter 13) - Tue 05 Mar 2013
I am really enjoying reading your story. I can hardly wait for more chapters to be put up. I am in suspense keep up the fabulous work.
mari (Chapter 12) - Sat 02 Mar 2013
i love this story thanks
Wow... I like it... More please
Eeeekk! Hojo just signed his death warrent. (always did think he was creepy)
Can't wait to see what happens next.
Oh, poo...... Can't wait for more!
Ooooooo......good.come back chapter. That cliffy at the end......itll get ya. Lol cant wait for the next chapter. Maybe not so long of a wait?
If that's Hojo, that's just twisted....cupcakes anyone? In place of popcorns cuz I hate them...
Breaking and entering, threatening, sexual harassment and creepily stalking an uninterested target....I know how it felt for the uninterested target and stalking part...had several of them myself, not that I'm talking big...it's simply annoying. As for Sesshoumaru's feeling of being the subject for most less than inteligent conversation, I know that one too. It's worst when you ignored them and keep to yourself, that just seem to incite further less than welcoming remarks. Now that's been said, can I kick Hojo now? I really feeling like pulling the sadistic 'rip his family jewels' torture method in Japan on him...
This chapter make me SQUEAL!!!!!!!
Midian (Chapter 11) - Sat 02 Mar 2013
welcome back good chapter name. Pleast stick around and write more.
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