I like your story.  I love your creative use of pickles.  I would have never thought to make Kagome have an addiction to them, the idea alone is brillant. I can't wait to read more.

hm well, this is interesting.. lol definitely made me laugh and well, i'm curious - and the mind definitely went in the gutter! i guess my brain still works? what a relief...? ha... XD

Hm, if this wasn't suppose to put my mind in the gutter, I'm screwed. Though it was somewhat vague, I'm am curious now.

 Unless I was pissed for some reason while looking at that wall of snapshots with obvious pent up mental and anger issues being conveyed via darts and what not, I don't believe I would have bit into that pickle...just yet...so, now let's continue, because if crunching down on that pickle could mean what my  mind is thinking, than someone just got his YKW (you know what) bitten for some reason.

Seeing as you have gotten my curiousity going, you have to know you just did a good job. Update quickly please.   JEN