Reviews for The Red Kimono by Mai

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jojo661538 (Chapter 1) - Thu 12 May 2011

i already like this story and its just the begining keep up the great work i hope to read more soon ^_^


kim92b (Chapter 1) - Wed 11 May 2011

Great first chapter , please update soon i would like to read more


Jenna (Chapter 1) - Wed 11 May 2011

I really like the beginning of this!  You've clearly worked hard on making it great (or you're just a naturally gifted writer-could be either).  I'm looking forward to the next chapter.  Both of my parents are elementary school teachers, and both of them are doing end of the year conferences now.  I can say from personal experience that conferences are the most stressful time for teachers.  But, I digress.  I hope you update soon, and I will most definitely keep up with this story!  Keep on it.


Flightoffancy (Chapter 1) - Wed 11 May 2011

I really liked this story.  You kept the characters true and strong.  It is also funny.  I hate matchmaking so I understand how Kagome feels.  No one can find someone for your heart.  Sesshomaru is always cool.  I will be interested to read more,  Good Luck.


Lady Midnight (Chapter 1) - Wed 11 May 2011

hazel (Chapter 1) - Wed 11 May 2011

Great story! Please continue updating! =]


Coastin (Chapter 1) - Wed 11 May 2011

Cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee


Ashes (Chapter 1) - Wed 11 May 2011

This is a promising begining. You captured the older/younger sister dynamic really well (at least from my experience). Again, great first impression and can't wait to see how it plays out.

Ah, a note. While Kagome is talking to Kikyo she says:

"Look, you can't try and fix me up with every man that might seem perfect who you've come across. If we haven't yet yet then the kami hasn't meant for us to,"

I think the first 'yet' in the second sentence is supposed to be 'met'. It's an easy mistake that spell check won't have picked up for you.


Azurena (Chapter 1) - Tue 10 May 2011

Ah! So cute! Please write more soon! I loved this first chapter! *squeals* Eagerly looking forward to more!


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