This was a great story I just wish it was longer. I also wish there was more info & more detail in it because until she woke up after they had mated & they spoke,it was very confusing & I was unsure if he was just there to rape her or use her . This could be a great story if you made it longer. It was still great as a one shot
TKE (Chapter 1) - Sat 30 Apr 2011
Beautiful...I loved it!!!!
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