you know i read this story quite a while ago and i remmebr thinking when the last chapter of the manga came out that this could easily be what happened next. I love this story good job.

It caught me off guard since I love happy endings. It was really good though. Very well written. I was sucked into the story even though it was only a oneshot.

I liked this the first time I read it and I like it the second time as well. Very good job :)

Very well written. Though the ending was sad it was a good way to tie the end.

Oh so sad! The ending leaves little hope for a completely happy ending (which I'm a real sucker for). Great grammar, though, and you have a wonderful way with words that draws the reader in.