Intoxicating...that's what this fic is. Every chapter leaves me a little more drunk than the last. Just keep allowing your imagination to flow naturally, giving the story it's own life. I can't wait for more. Lots of love! JEN
Wow. I'm very much impressed!! So amazing... Plot twists and turns and this is one of the most unique stories I've ever read. The characters are portrayed in different ways from the norm. Very nice, very nice :) Hope to hear more from this story soon!!
Tootles
Aha! Butterflies!! Hmmmm... -looks at the chapter with a magnifying glass and a slight frown, recoils suddenly in fright, her rounded hind cheeks cushioning her graceless fall to the unforgiving ground- Argh!! Cliffie! I'm hit! -Dies with a gurgle-
Very good chapter, as always. -says an ominous disembodied voice- Dewa mata (Sorry about the silliness, I was just about to write when I read your story... urgh ^_^)
Ashes (Chapter 15) - Wed 23 Jul 2008
Wow... again your chapters make my days better. Thankies! The cliffhanger could be more evil, so I'm not going to complain. *smiles* Have a wonderful week.
Of all the things you've written this chapter may be my new favorite. Short, but I'll allow it if you say it needed to end but...Oh you tease me so. Many parts I loved, especially the kiss and the butterflies, and seriously "walking funny and trying his best to hide it". I LOVE how you pick on Sess. Do it some more.
Mrs_Sesshomaru (Chapter 15) - Tue 22 Jul 2008
Hey! I didn't get my normanl update email. *pout, sniffle* I just happened to look at the site. Anywho... kickass chapter & OMG if you don't stop leaving cliffies I'm going to have heart attack! Yay! Update soon.
FleetingDream (Chapter 11) - Tue 22 Jul 2008
Oh my god, I missed six chapters tsk tsk... I'll have to read like the wind lol and get back to you for my review
Oh I enjoyed! I love all the layers you are slowly peeling away, all the while so excited to see what will, at long length, be revealed. My dear, you can spin one hell of a yarn.
Dana Daidouji (Chapter 14) - Fri 18 Jul 2008
This story is one of the best that I've read as of late. I'm loving this chapter by chapter. Keep un with the excellent work!
Tilayha (Chapter 14) - Thu 17 Jul 2008
I am really enjoying what you are doing with Sango and Miroku. The confusion in the bubble bath was priceless! And the frying pan was helarious! The developing of the relationships throughout ths story is amazing. Slow and painful for us readers, lol, but well worth it by the end of each glorious chapter. I have to say this one is by far my most favorite of your works.Apart from the tea education I am getting,(I love tea)you hold true to each character. I am curious as to when Narkau is going to show his real intentions though. I am looking forward, eagerly to the next chapter.
This is a highly unusual and exotic adventure. I really like the corkscrew slant you have on this couple and in your stories in general.
The things Sesshomaru thinks in his head or says to Miroku just make me cringe. They are also in keeping with his arrogant nature. I also like the stories that do not allow Kagome to be childish or tempermental. She is not going to put up with any crap but she is also not stomping her feet, pouting or throwing things.
She is smart and crafty and caring and compassionate. I have always loved your stories and I especially like that you recommend other stories and authors. You are very generous and kind, a rarity these days.
I have learned a lot about tea rituals and different teas so it is not just a fluffy piece of yumminess (but I love those too).
I like seeing Miroku and Sango protrayed a little differently. I like it that he takes charge and calms down her propensity for violence. Time will tell if this is his wake-up call.
You are COOL. CAnnot wait for the next installment. Til next time, Deb.
Akay (Chapter 14) - Thu 17 Jul 2008
Woah... that chapter hit me like a whirlwind. In both good and bad ways. Good because I loved the way everything was worded. The beating around the bush and whatnot. Bad... because *refers back to bush statement* I think I missed something. So, I'm going to have to re-read it again and hopefully something will click. Or maybe this is one of those chapters I just have to wait for the next to understand. I have no idea, but I'm determined to figure it out. *smiles* Have a good one EP
You are in sooo much trouble with my hubby. I stayed up till 3:20am reading it. :giggle::
Lovely chapter as always M'dear. I always look forward to it.
My kitty loved it as well as I read it aloud to him. He agrees that it was a wonderful chapter, though in his opinion there are way too many dog mentions in the story. But what do you expect from my furry friend, ne?
Big hugs,
The LadySafire and Lord Smokey Kitty
Ashes (Chapter 14) - Wed 16 Jul 2008
Yay! *happy dance* I must say I'm enthralled. The dairy is such a curious little object, I can't wait to see what all it's use is throughout the story. Kagome's random neck grab at Sango kinda threw me off. I hope you're going to explain that at some point. Thank you so much for another wonderful installment! I look forward to the next chapter. *Warm wishes*
Ezriee (Chapter 13) - Sat 12 Jul 2008
hehehe, FINALLY I get a chance to catch up and read this! I've been dying to ever since you posted it but just couldn't get time.
I love the interaction between Miroku and Sango though she's acting a bit crazy. I can't wait to see what has gone on her life to make her like that.
As far as the butterfly...that has got me thinking overtime. I know that in some cultures, the butterfly is believed to carry the souls of the dead...also has something to do with 'star crossed' lovers in some old poems I read many many moons ago...butterflies could mean maidenhood too...so with Sessh cutting the wings...lol
overanalyzing again!
Well, keep up the wonderful work and I look forward to more!
Ezzy
Tana_san (Chapter 1) - Tue 08 Jul 2008
Thanks for the memo, EP. I was so caught up in catching up on all my fics, I forgot to register here. I am proud to say I am totally up to date. Looking forward to the next chapter. JEN
Langus (Chapter 4) - Tue 08 Jul 2008
I started this adventure today. All I can say so far is that it's beautifully written and I enjoy the brewing chemistry. You always handle these two so well. Reading your work has inspired me to write again. Thank you for that :)
Congrats on the IYFG nom.
Hugs,
Langus
Musouka (Chapter 13) - Sun 06 Jul 2008
I Finally Caught Up And I Must Say Chapter 13 Was Amazing! Miroku And Sango, Sesshomaru And Kagome Oh I Feel The Love In The Air. Very Soothing Chapter Also, Can't Wait To Read More! Until The Next Update ... Peace!
I will re-read if I want to. I like re-reading it as sometimes I catch a nuance I may have missed the first time. And I just plain like you stories.
hugs,
Safire
(Yes, Mom, I am resting.)wink
I just found this story (don't know how I missed it since I am reading all your other ones) and LOVE it. Can't wait till next installment, but I do have a question or two...
Back in chapter 10, Miroku mentions InuYasha and that he is human that night, but notes the silvery moon. Inu is human on the night of the new moon (which is no moon) and the next chapter also Kagome notes the moon in the sky. And when InuYasha comes into the scene you note that his eyes are amber, which when he is human they are brown. Just wondering if this was an oversight or what.
I do so LOVE that Miroku stands up and speaks his mind to Sango. She needs a wake up call, far too violent. Can't wait for more interaction between all main Inu characters, and for Kagome to finally be told more about how bad Naraku is (and say, did he have something to do with her families deaths???) and for her to finally see through or acknowledge Sess' true features and nature.
Again.... LOVING THIS STORY. Love all your writings. Keep up great work.
Rhonda
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