Reviews for Wings by Riku Ryuu

Orchid (Chapter 9) - Mon 18 Jul 2011
Man if I were in her situation and I'd just gotten a pair of big beautiful wings....it would have only taken me a second before I started trying them out! I'd be jumping off anything within reach or flapping them....anything to see if I could fly and yell out woooooo hooooo!!!! Come on kagome! Stretch those beauties out! She could totally leave the guys in the dust and get away probably or at least put them in a panic :D that'd be amusing!

Azumii (Chapter 9) - Sun 19 Jun 2011

I love it.  It is really quite interesting and fun.  I love adventure, fantasy stories!!!! ^_^
xoxox


Silverwing (Chapter 8) - Sat 07 May 2011

It may be odd but I am thoroughly enjoying the quirks! It reminds me of a book I read years back but I can't put my finger on what it was... Thank you for the update!


an (Chapter 8) - Sat 07 May 2011

Your story is very unique and original. I noticed in your first chapter, you said you wrote it for a writing competition. This didn't really cross my mind until I saw a mistake in Chapter 8. When Shippo has sea sickness on the turtle, you accidently call him Lukas. I know you are taking it from original to Inuyasha, so it wasn't that big of a deal. However, for someone who doesn't read your authors notes, they may believe you are plagerizing. You are a well respected author and I do not want this to happen to you. It easily ruins careers. A second pair of eyes may do your story a lot of good.

I hope I haven't sounded insulting or accusatory in any way. I just wanted to let you know.


Brittany (Chapter 7) - Thu 05 May 2011

This story is strange but entertaining. Update


SmilingFool (Chapter 6) - Sun 01 May 2011

Wow this is one totally weird fic....  I love it.  So different than anything I've read.  What an imagination you have.  I can't wait to read more.


Azurena (Chapter 6) - Sun 01 May 2011

For some reason I pictured her wings to look like iridescent butterfly wings that changed color when the light hit them lol. Never once thought about feathers hahaha. It's interesting to picture, rainbow feather wings, and I'm anxious to see what this will mean for Kagome . . .


Lillian (Chapter 6) - Sun 01 May 2011

The only issue I have with this chapter is Sango's flippancy. I can understand it to a point, because she doesn't really know Kagome, but wouldn't she want to get into the good graces of Kagome if she was the most powerful person in the world?

Otherwise, I am psyched up! This is developing at an excellent rate.


Lillian (Chapter 5) - Sun 01 May 2011

Haaaa hahahahahahah! Wings! She gets wings, and Sango gets a hat. This made me laugh so hard. I am in mad, mad, reader's love with this story. I am so serious. The world is amazing, and how you portray the strangeness Kagome must see is excellent. I look forwards to reading the next chapter!


Azurena (Chapter 4) - Thu 28 Apr 2011

Well this is definitely cool! I personally would think falling into another world would be nothing short of amazing! A little frightening, yes, but still. Good life experience lol

Hope you update again soon!


Elle (Chapter 3) - Thu 28 Apr 2011

I loved it although I found the seduction scene with Naraku somewhat creepy...

I can't wait for updates!

Also, I hope you'll update your other story 'Assistant to Evil' soon!

Till next time~


Kagome-Miko-207 (Chapter 3) - Thu 28 Apr 2011

Oh this is getting really good!!!!!! I wanna know what that thing around her neck is. >_<

Well I guess I wont find out till next time. C=

Till then...


vicki patterson (Chapter 3) - Thu 28 Apr 2011

love it, it is a beautiful story cant wait til the next chapter

 


Eve (Chapter 3) - Thu 28 Apr 2011

This is really a fun story.  Love the ren fairs.  look forward to the next chapter very much!


Azurena (Chapter 3) - Wed 27 Apr 2011

This is offically a fave *puts in Favorites*

It's so . . . I don't know. Mystical and enthralling? You write very well, and your flow is excellent, which only makes it better. And those men! Oh! So angry at them! What in the world makes them think it's all right to pick a girl out of a crowd and decide to share her between the three of them?! *shivers with disgust*

But she's finally fallen in the lake! Now the real fun will begin, I think! Lol

Hope you update again soon!


Lillian (Chapter 3) - Wed 27 Apr 2011

Oh my goodness! This is so very, very interesting! I look forwards to the next installment.


Azurena (Chapter 2) - Wed 27 Apr 2011

Curiouser and curiouser . . . what will happen next? Hmmm . . . Very strange. I'd be keeping my eye on that necklace if I were Kagome :P

Hope your next update is soon!


Kagome-Miko-207 (Chapter 2) - Wed 27 Apr 2011

Never read something quite like this. It certainly has caught my attention. C= Cant wait for more.

Im thinking her strange actions have to do something with that necklace......


Azurena (Chapter 1) - Tue 26 Apr 2011

Wow! I'm so curious now! Will you please update soon? The Renaissance Fair is a new twist I've yet to read anywhere before, so I'm really excited to see where this goes and what exactly the fortune teller was talking about. 

Please please please update soon!


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