love this story and can't wait for the next update.
Okay, I really like what you've done here with this little tale. Great visuals and I agree with your boyfriend, the first couple of chapters went really fast. I would be looking for a little more back ground on the male that changed Kagome and how she came to be. Also, will he return for her and give Sesshomaru a run for his money? Obviously, this is supposed to be a Sess/Kag, and I love seeing the almighty stoic one who claims to have no feelings be challenged for someone he wants.
Anyway, awesome start and looking forward to seeing where you go with this!
Avy (Chapter 5) - Thu 05 May 2011
I'm really enjoying this original story. Keep the chapters coming! :)
Oh Please (Chapter 4) - Mon 02 May 2011
I like it. The idea of her being a large predatory cat and not some simple housecat is quite intriguing. You have written this well. I hope she gets to eat more and fill out to her true potential.
Also, very good fight scene. Oh, my favorite scene by far was the abduction of his mighty fluff. Hope that happens several more times.
Keep up the great work.
I like it so far! Getting reviews is like pulling teeth...from a Bakeneko ;) So don't fret about it too much. It's a good story and I look forward to further installments.
lauren (Chapter 2) - Thu 28 Apr 2011
a bus... covered in razor blades!! Haha! Anyway, I am enjoying your story! I await your next update.
>.< Ow cat bite. I like this and I'm can't wait to read the next chapter. : D
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