A delightful story.

I would have liked to see a larger consequence to Rin and Kagome's escape. Their disappearance was a bit too tidy for me. But on the otherhand, perhaps you a only teasing and will use it for sequel fodder... Well, a girl can hope.

it was awesome!! i loved every bit of it! (and... i think me and you are the only ones that have done the challenge O.o)

^^

Overall a wonderful story, I'm kind of disappointed it's over as I seem to love everything you write. If you did decide to do the Sesshomaru as a slave thing and managed to turn it into a comedy.....I'd be amused. Not many would be able to pull that off, it either turns into a heated romance (which is good), or a darkfic (also good), but humor....now that's something I'd love to see. If anyone can pull it off it's you.

I really enjoyed your story....I would love to read more!!!!

aww sesshoumaru's so sweet :)

What a great chapter.  I can't believe it is almosst done.  I hope you have other ideas waiting in the wings.  This one really stirred my imagination and I start at the beginning every time you post another chapter.  Can't wait for more.  DEB

OMG.. I have absolutly fallenin love with this fic.. Love the way its progressing and cannot wait for more.. I rarely review but I just felt I had to let you know how much i love this fic

I know that if you take a hobby, or as is your case "a gift", and turn it into something more solid and productive it won't be as much fun anymore, but I think, in this case, that it will just run away with you.  This  chapter was very good.  I didn't see "Wife" coming into this.  Very funny, especially when she chased him.  As for High Standards, I really don't have any, I just know what I like and what captures my attention.  I read alot of books and I read a lot of Fanfiction.  I like seeing other peoples efforts and ideas.  I guess, basically, because I have them too but am not talented enough to put them on paper, so I admire your courage and how it displays itself.  And I know what you mean about some stories not being finished.  It gets frustrating sometimes.  Can't wait til next time.  DEB

I found myself eagerly awaiting this story and it did not disappoint.  You are quite talented and you carry the story through.  But I was actually GRINNING when I saw you in my email.  I rarely do that and I am pretty tuff.  Can't wait for the next installment.  DEB

amazing, as always ^^

I love your stories! I cant wait to read the rest!

Awesome! you update fast =]

This was a really good chapter. I like how you introduced the characters and the situation with Rin.

Hope you update soon again. Great job! XD =] ;)

really loving this!

This is an extremely good story.  It is fast moving  and the characters are very well  fleshed out and strong, and in just a few descriptive phrases, not some long drawn out wordy thing.  If you can keep up the pace and the storyline you've got yourself a hit.  I shall  be interested to see where this goes.  So far you are doing fabulous.  Can't wait for more.

Hope you udate soon! This was really good for a first chapter =]