Loved the story so far 

I found this story not even looking for it an I absolutly love it!! Was reading another story on fanfiction.net and after I was done I was going through the author's favorite stories and ran into yours. I have spent the last several hours completely hooked in your story and I truly hope you come back to it eventually. I finished all 43 chapters and realized it wasn't finished but you also have it posted here so came to check if by chance you had more chapters up here, to no luck. With that I really really hope that you come back to this story. It is like nothing I have read before and it really drew me in like I was there as everything happened.

I first read this fic years ago, and for the last 3 weeks I had been scouring this site looking for this story with only the clear memory of the ink marking in my head. Although it is unfinished, and may remain so, I am so so glad that I found it! i Reread this after rereading and finishing Alpha, and I knew I had to leave a review because your stories are phenomenal. I can clearly picture everything that is happening and the emotion the story is telling. I'm about to go read through the rest of your stories, they are so well written and I just absolutely love your writing style. If you have any published stories, I would buy them in a heartbeat. Whether or not you return to this story is up to you and what you want to do, but I will always be hopeful. Either way, I truly hope that you continue writing if it is your passion, you could tell so many stories and I would just eat them up, and if there were enough hours in the day and sleep was not so necessary, I would have finished this and Alpha overnight instead of over the past week. Honestly, I'm not sure what to write in this review to full express how much I adore your writing, and how much I appreciate you for having this archive that I can read through during these times as a needed break from reality, so thank you, thank you for writing these stories and sharing them with us.

You have fallen off the face of the earth please come back and finish this

Great story so far. 

This was so good! sad it was abandoned

O.O if I beg real nice would you please finish this story I only found it two days ago and have not been able to stop reading it outside of sleep and other hygiene needs.

I. LOVE. THIS. STORY! I am sooo sad to see that there aren't more chapters here for me to read =[. I know you haven't updated this in about a year, but I genuinely hope you do soon! It would be such a shame to see this incredible story left unfinished!! I'm hooked! You have to be one of the best writers I've have the pleasure of coming across on here, or any other site, really. You're writing is so eloquent and beautiful, you just draw the reader completely and totally into the story. Writing like yours is so rare and I really do hope you continue this!! Soo...great job!! Keep it up! I'll be watching for new chapters, when and if, they come!

Omg i love this magical thing you call a story

hee hee after too much lemons in this site, a torture or two is good :D

and i like the new kagome

hee hee after too much lemons in this site, a torture or two is good :D

and i like the new kagome

i like how you killed off inuyasha XD

but why is kiwanai still around

i love it! dead inuyasha!

And WHAT a surprise!!!  *contented sigh*  I end my day with a delightful chapter of one of my most favorite stories - how could ANYTHING be better than THAT???

Oh, the intrigue... the twists and turns and ups and downs!  I thought the original was terrific, but you have so far surpassed that in this rendition, I can't begin to tell you.  So much to keep in mind and piece together!  You, my dear, are a wizard at this and I cannot thank you enough for this oh-so-delicious surprise for my birthday.

YOU SO ROCK!!!

:D

~~me~~

Nice chapter, keep it coming.

please don't take long for the next chapters!! i love this story! i'll be waiting! keep it coming! really soon!!!!

Awsome story I eagerly await the next chapters and the continuing of this story. I have added this story to my favorites list as well as you the author to my favorties 

OMG I JUST ABOUT CRAPPED WHEN THIS CHAPTER WAS POSTED!! I had to read the whole story again before I read new chapter!!! It's as juicy as you left it! Thank you for updating, hope all is well!!! Kagome & Sango make a disturbing pair, I loved how Sango could be demon like....maybe she's got demon blood in her too!!! Lol love it love it!!!!

What a chapter.  It will be interesting to see what the motives are for Sesshomaru...and Kinawai and his mate.