Reviews for Ukime No Sekisetsu by Lyra

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candace peaches (Chapter 30) - Sat 16 Sep 2017

two words: LOVED IT!!!!


ponpiri (Chapter 30) - Sun 30 Apr 2017

Oh, man. I didn't realize you wrote Bloodlust on FF. I have the same criticism for this story that I had for that one. The opening chapters were too stylized for my taste. As if you wrote them to be stilted on purpose with choppy dialog and half explanations. Then I saw that you wrote poems for the story and i thought, 'oh... great' lol. That's not to say that the beginning of the story was bad. Far from it, just not my taste.

 

HOWEVER, as soon as you allowed the characters to open  up, so did your writing - and it was gorgeous. I loved the last 10 or so chapters because the reader was able to understand the story completely without having to fill in blanks along with the character. I also thought it was amazing that we saw Sesshoumaru's POV as well. It's rare, but it was done so well here. The citrus was tastefully

 

Anyway, Lyra, girl... YOU DID THAT with this story. I hope you come back some day to complete Bloodlust. And for the people who are rightfully pissed about her stories having less reviews here, check her out on FF 'lyrainthedark' and spam review her stories. Let's get her to come back!!


ponpiri (Chapter 8) - Sun 30 Apr 2017

idk... it still seems strange that Kagome keeps saying 'she was just a human girl.' That doesn't sound like a thought she would have, especially after seeing Sesshou hold a dead Rin in his arms. Just... strange and slightly off-character for a bleeding heart like Kagome.


ponpiri (Chapter 5) - Sat 29 Apr 2017

I know Kagome's question is connected to Sesshoumaru's pain, but I'm still irritated that she's asking such a silly question. Of course Rin is dead. She was human just like Sango and Miroku, so Kago's insistent question is baffling.


Jean (Chapter 30) - Mon 03 Apr 2017

Wonderful, amazing story! I love the detail and depth of your characters and the emotions involved. I hope you have continued to write in some way in your life!


Manda (Chapter 29) - Thu 03 Mar 2016

Literally the best SessKag story I've ever read. Like...wow.


Nicole (Chapter 30) - Fri 02 May 2014

That was fantastic. The emotions were so wonderfully written that I had to read this over several days / reading sessions; some cut pretty close to home (though, fortunately, not for the same reasons). The characters also remained much more "in character" than I tend to expect. Very well done. 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 30) - Fri 21 Feb 2014

This story was amazing and I enjoyed it, Happy Valentine's Day!


AnimeLady04 (Chapter 30) - Mon 27 Jan 2014

awesome story I enjoyed reading it!


Wickedone43 (Chapter 30) - Tue 12 Feb 2013

Wow!

This is  just as good as the I rest time I read it.

Excellent story line. Simply amazing fic!!!

 


jenny (Chapter 30) - Sat 31 Mar 2012

I've read this story before on different sites and I could be wrong but it seems as if each of the versions seems to be a bit different. There are also some things I find confusing but regardless...I love this story. 


wickedone43 (Chapter 30) - Tue 28 Feb 2012

Greatness...

Awesome...

Wow....

Words escape me now that I try to give you praise for your works.  The entertainment value, the writing skill, the captivating story line....Wow!

 

Please continue writing and I do mean writing anything you want.

 

Congrats and yay for the rest of us!


StormieLikeWeather (Chapter 30) - Fri 24 Feb 2012

I am enamored with this story! Your style of writing, the language you use is utterly beautiful. I have read a vast amount of fanfictions and I must say Ukime No Sekisetsu ranks in at least my top five.

Thank you for writing so exquisitely!

`Stormie


rindou (Chapter 1) - Sun 29 Jan 2012

im sorry, but i find myself very confused. this chapter diddnt make much sense


Inkasha Taisho (Chapter 30) - Sat 31 Dec 2011

This was quite an adventure. A new treasure to add to me reread list in the future. Excellent work.


Reader in Disguise (Chapter 30) - Fri 30 Dec 2011

Many times while reading your story I felt as if it was a poem rather than a tale. So beautiful, elegant, colorful, passionate and full of magic that it was a true joy!

I think this are the kind of stories that stay with you and kepp others coming back, like thirsty travelers to the spring.

Wonderfully done, I look forward to read more from you!

Thank you!


Quiet Whisper (Chapter 30) - Tue 22 Nov 2011

Wow this story was amazing. The feelings were so real and tangible that i couldn't help but feel both happy and sad for them. I'm glad Shippo made it though, and that you gave Sesshomaru a little girl so much like his Rin. Awesome job!!!


emerald skye (Chapter 30) - Tue 06 Sep 2011

Wow. You DO do epics well! Wow. Ok. I know I need to say more than this. But, I can't so... Wow. 

Alright, I'm good now. I've never read a story that was chapterized (word?) like yours. At the beginning it was kind of like his side, then hers, back and forth. But as the story developed, it grew past that and basically continued the story. Your ability to switch perspectives without losing the flow and style of the story was awesome. And the plot itself was unique in a sense. Yes, there's a few fics out there about Sess and Kag being the only ones left and how they continue on, blah blah, but yours had a unique edge and darker side, giving it that extra oomph. Just, really, though, terrific story and a total breath of fresh air. A tantalizing breath, by the way!


Kimberly (Chapter 30) - Sun 07 Aug 2011

Margie (Chapter 30) - Mon 30 May 2011

Wonderful story.... simply wonderful!!! xoxo


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