Reviews for Puppy Love by Demon Selene

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Kagome1616 (Chapter 10) - Tue 24 Feb 2009
Please update soon!! I absolutely love this story, its too funny!!

BeautifulMorningSun (Chapter 10) - Wed 03 Dec 2008
Well, It Seems That Not a Single Thing About This Chapter Went the Way You Wanted It Too, But Don't Freak Too Much, It Was a GREAT Chapter! But No Offence, Could You Edit It Before You Post It? Your Grammer Is Really Bad. But I LOVE the Story! Please Update As Soon As You Can, You're Doing a Great Job!

SilentlyFuming (Chapter 10) - Tue 02 Dec 2008
great chapter, poor Miroku is so misunderstood... *^_^* I'm glad you didn't end this yet, looking forward to future chapters!

snowbird (Chapter 10) - Sun 30 Nov 2008
Hello Demon Selene. I'm back! I've been all over the place trying to chase down all the stories I use to follow on ASS plus it took this site quite a while to work out it's bugs. Also I've been waiting for you to add new chapters to this story, my favorite Sess/Kag comedy. It would seem that everyone except Kagome and Inuyasha (Kouga doesn't count) knows that Fluffy and Sesshoumaru are one and the same. I'm glad to see that she's finally showing some interest in someone besides Inuyasha. When I was her age, no one dared to call me stupid or bitch, let alone both together. Otherwise, they got a knuckle sandwich. It didn't matter what gender. When Inuyasha says bitch, he means it in the derogatory way and not pack way. I can't help it. Even in a comedy that irritates me the way he talks to her and treats her. What's even more irritating is, she lets him get away with it most of the time and keeps forgiving him. He verbally abuses her, plays on her emotions, insensitive, too immature for her, and can't she smell him? Sorry, but I'm not a fan of her crying and whining after Inuyasha in any story. I just finished reading it again from the 1st chapter to here and laughed just as much this time as I did the first time. There aren't that many good Sess/Kag comedies and my opinion is that this one takes 1st place. It's good to be back.

artemise (Chapter 10) - Sat 29 Nov 2008
i loved it. i can't wait for the next chapter ^_^!

Amanda (Chapter 9) - Mon 17 Nov 2008
I love this story. Sesshoumaru as a puppy is so cute. I hope you update soon and keep up the good work.

-Liz- (Chapter 7) - Mon 13 Oct 2008
>_ovely! please please please write more!!!! ^_^; i sound like a little kid......but still! I love your puppy Sessh! Its really refreshing to find someone who actually writes a plot and not just a crack-fic that makes sense....(can a crack-fic make sense?) i am waiting impatiently for your next chapter!

emmyjenny (Chapter 1) - Thu 09 Oct 2008
its rare for me to find a story and i don't want to change the plot to what i think it should be :) so this is a rare moment lol this is one of the best works... i'm not sure about that phasing but oh well...i've read... i would love to see what happens in chapter 10 (cause i read the ASS version before coming here) i really want to know how it turns out... really badly :) btw you continue to say 'threw' instead of 'through'..(he 'threw' the ball) (She flew 'through' the door in a murderous rage.) i'd also like to mention that if puppies aren't allowed to walk of their own accord they loose a lot of their ability to walk... i think it slightly unnecessary to have Kagome carry Sesshomaru all the time... i mean it seems logical while running from an enemy or something but to carry him everywhere.. i'd also like to say one thing... well two things 1) "house training" possibly Fluffy peeing on Inuyasha while he's ranting at Kagome hehe... 2) dog collar hehe... need i say more...also isn't it against the law or something for dogs to go around without a lead or/and collar?.. since i don't own a dog i'm not sure... but i'm sure the lead thing applies or the pound/RSPCA come and take them... and since i'm sure that Sesshomaru doesn't have a chip he'd be in big trouble..

nanatsunade (Chapter 6) - Tue 30 Sep 2008
I'm really enjoying this story, but it is really irritating how you keep using the word "well", when you mean and should use "while". Please, correct this!!!!

Elenna (Chapter 7) - Sat 27 Sep 2008
Awww....more! I love this story! It's so cute...and WHY DIDN'T SESSHOMARU TELL HER HE'S FLUFFY?!!! Lol...I get it though...that would really ruin the story...it was so cute that he was naked though! Please update soon!

slayer0427 (Chapter 7) - Sat 27 Sep 2008
AAAAWWWWWW HOW CUTE!!!!!! CUTE SESSHY PUPPY!!!! Its funny how one minute he's sesshy den >POOF

stars (Chapter 7) - Fri 26 Sep 2008
love this one please keep going

sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 6) - Fri 19 Sep 2008
i think my favorite part of this was where they say it nothing like Jaken its too quiet, then it makes a noise hahahahaha, that was adorable.

SilentlyFuming (Chapter 6) - Fri 19 Sep 2008
lol 'SQUAK! Never mind.'

snowbird (Chapter 1) - Sun 14 Sep 2008
Here I am crying again. Please upload from ASS faster. I want new updates. I see several other reviewers are of the same mind frame as me. We're all just hanging in there waiting for new chapters.

Sala (Chapter 5) - Sat 06 Sep 2008
In Japan, school is six days a week. The students stay in the same room, while the teachers rotate (very different from in the USA)

jaimesesshy (Chapter 1) - Fri 29 Aug 2008
I really hope that you can update soon. I read all that you had posted on ASS, and I want to read the rest!...oh, I just noticed that UtterChaos247 said just about the same thing. Oh well

SilentlyFuming (Chapter 3) - Fri 08 Aug 2008
update soon!! i read all the chapters and A-Single-Spark and really want to see more of the story here

Sala (Chapter 2) - Sat 02 Aug 2008
If you are going to take some time in uploading your already written chapters that were previously housed on A Single Spark, could you also go back and edit them a bit more? Each chapter has a number of spelling errors... But it is great to see this story now on Dokuga. :)

Bluemiko (Chapter 2) - Sat 02 Aug 2008
Cute, been awhile since you updated. You have me on the edge of my seat for next time.

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