Reviews for Puppy Love by Demon Selene

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Daniella (Chapter 15) - Mon 20 Feb 2017

Keep posting!


Kai (Chapter 15) - Thu 07 Jun 2012

I can not WAIT for your next update :3 I do hope everthing is going well for you.


InuLuna of The Moon (Chapter 15) - Sun 18 Mar 2012

No... you left a cliff hanger! So not fair -sniffle- well actually it is. I love your story.

Sorry I didn't write sooner to leave a review. lol I tend to keep reading if I like it and continue till the farthest chapter or till I'm practically twitching to type! You've got a great imagination. Who would have thought CD's? So ironic through time travel. And you did great on POV and picturing the chapters weren't that bad. I noticed you kept spelling well instead of with and in some places mine instead of mind. I've noticed you've been steadily improving the later the chapters in your spelling and grammer.

Oh my gosh the Consuela had me rolling on the floor laughing! It was priceless. Or all those funny aquard moments with Sesshoumaru changing with out cloths and how Kagome's brother and grandfather found out. Or the Fluffy fan club. The timeing in your plot was awsome! You have got a lovely spark of humor with a twist of your personality writen into it. I realy am fidgiting in my seat. Can't wait for another chapter ^-^

PQ(personal question): BTW do you have a personal vendeta to smacking Miroku around? lol


Smittee (Chapter 15) - Mon 04 Oct 2010

I love the story so far. I laughed like crazy when the demon died after saying to Inuaysha that it was nice to meet him. XDDD That was great. Can't wait for more!


swift death (Chapter 15) - Fri 23 Jul 2010

great chapter! never expected THAT to happen. took me by surprise. hope you upload another chapter soon :)


Kukuro-kunami (Chapter 13) - Sat 03 Jul 2010

lmao luvd da part wif da demon and inuyasha having a convo. XD

 


SunflowerDreams21 (Chapter 1) - Fri 02 Jul 2010

Absolutely beautiful story. I read it all in two days. Because I had to work and I even read it on my lunch and breaks. I was addicted.I still am. I can't wait til your next update. Keep up the good work and don't let what anyone tells you get you down. they're probably just mad they didn't think of the idea. But like i was saying love your work. Sesshoumaru's cuteness makes me squeal in absolute girly fashion.


Jandy (Chapter 15) - Thu 01 Jul 2010

I can honeslty tell you, I let out an awkaward girlish shriek when I saw the update ^-^""

I can't wait for the next one, keep up the good work, I love this sorty so much!!


jojo661538 (Chapter 14) - Wed 23 Jun 2010

hahaha this is the greatest story i have ever read keep up the great work i hope to read more soon ^_^


Alexis Lundy (Chapter 14) - Tue 04 May 2010

This is still so adorable! lol. I can't wait for Inuyasha's reaction.


swift death (Chapter 14) - Mon 19 Apr 2010

i commend you very much for the way you write and this story is a very good and funny one. one of the best one i have read in all the story i have heard. update another chapter if you can and i would be very gratefull if you did. till the next chapter


swift death (Chapter 14) - Fri 16 Apr 2010

aaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwww!!!!! Fluffy rule!!!!!!!! you need to hury up and make a new chapter or beter yet finish the dang story!!!!!!!!!!1


Diane (Chapter 14) - Sat 03 Apr 2010

I like it over all. Just because it's driving me nuts you have a recurring word choice error, it's mind with a d NOT mine, mine means whatever belongs to me; the object is mine, mind is another word for your brain, like make up your mind.


MistressMomo (Chapter 13) - Tue 16 Mar 2010

"grrrrrrrr" I don't know about anyone else but I have been waiting for a long time for you to update. I really like where you are taking this story and I wish you would see it though to the end. I really 'dislike' people who keep me waiting lol. So please update so I can stop dreaming about what happens next. Thanks, lots of love, and DON'T get writer's block. :)


Anonymous (Chapter 3) - Wed 04 Nov 2009

Hi! I've read the first three chapters of your story and I have to say it seems really cute. My only suggestion is to please review your grammar as well as consider your sentence configuration and punctuation. I've seen so many potentially good fan fictions crippled by poor grammar and syntax. I want to read more, however the lack of the aforementioned is detrimental to the flow of your writing. On the plus side you’re writing is clever and I find the situations you’ve placed your leading hero in thus far entertaining. Oh, and cute – certainly cute.


KisshuHeaven (Chapter 13) - Tue 20 Oct 2009

ok... reading Puppy Love has become part of my schedule. everyday after school, i do my homework, read a chapter, and have dinner. and now that i've read all there is so far, YOU RUINED MY SCHEDULE! I guess i might forgive you if you update soon... ;)

really awesome story. the plot is just too cute :3


Jandy (Chapter 13) - Mon 31 Aug 2009
This is the cutest most funniest story I have ever read haha I loved the part when the demon was all like "I think I'm going to die now, it was nice meeting you" to Inuyasha that was soooo epic hahahah (ur a genious) this story is going to my faves keep updating please

~Juggalette4Lyfe420~ (Chapter 13) - Fri 28 Aug 2009
I only have one thing to ask of u and that is PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT u must continue........ i need to know what happens next :D wonderful story keep writing i cant wait for the next chapter!!!!!!

Msz_Legendkiller (Chapter 13) - Mon 24 Aug 2009
Ehem... This chapyter has been the most beautiful and amazing and rewarding chapter i enjoy ur story very much,. Its veryyyyyy SIMPLY.ASTONISHING.BREATHTAKING ehehe

emmyjenny (Chapter 13) - Sun 23 Aug 2009
awesome :) i can't wait to see what happens :) it sounds so great and wonderful and great lol this is the awesome-est fanfic i've read in a while and the fact that you've updated it makes me even happier :) sorry i didn't review sooner i tend to find that if i leave people to update a few times i get to read more :) it doesn't mean i don't love your story less it just means that.... i don't know what it means lol but what ever it means i'm sure its good :) lol update when you can :) can't wait to see what happens seriously :)

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