Okay, I have some questions:
1. Didn't he remove the necklace? I would think that would be the first thing he would do since he was assured that she couldn't hurt him. And it's not very loving to keep your mate enslaved.
2. Wouldn't she insist he destroy the slavers and the dark miko? I would expect her to be a little pissed with all of them and want a little of her own back.
3. Wouldn't having the other girls freed and returned to their homes be something she would ask of him - at least as a mating gift?
scent, not sent = smell
Other than that, it was a good story.
That was so cute. A nice little one-shot to start the day.
lily (Chapter 1) - Tue 12 Apr 2011
luv it! but would luv it more if d story was longer and more detailed. but ova all good job
0o0o0o AWESOME! but there needs MORE!!! BIRDFAY MATING GIFT: slave traders head. i dunno i like it all but the fact that a dark miko got up on kagome, seriosuly that twat needs to have her head taken >:l if Tsubaki couldnt get her i cant see how anyone else could!
Off with her head!
more please!
*wiggles c0okies at you*
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