I encourage you to write more!
This is a new twist on Sesshoumaru/Kagome fandom! Never came across this plot line before!
Good luck, Hope to read more of your work!
very different and incredibly interesting. cant wait for an update,
Rin (Chapter 2) - Mon 11 Apr 2011
Ok, That explained a lot. I was having a hard time figureing out how tall you meant them to be, background info on where they came from, etc. That was a great way to explain it too. <3
Kagome a submissive?....I'm not so sure. Is she going to be until she gets riled up? That would suit her.
Looking forward to your next update. <3
Rin (Chapter 1) - Mon 11 Apr 2011
A very interesting beginning. I'm intrigued and can;t wait to see where you take this. <3
Good Job on the 2 chapters. With them combined, it flows easier. So, what will happen when she meets Sess? I see a lot of funny things.
tiana (Chapter 2) - Mon 11 Apr 2011
omg thiz iz rlly gud kant wait for sesshy 2 meet kagome :)
Absolute chaos huh, was it caused by her or did someone in the male pens start a riot, lol. I hope you update soon, i really like this story.
monk-miko (Chapter 2) - Mon 11 Apr 2011
I really want to know what will happen now with Kagome. Please continue and I hope to see a new chapter soon.
missy (Chapter 1) - Fri 08 Apr 2011
This is a really great, wonderful, good, awesome story and i love it and like it since i first started reading it, your a very great author who wrote this very great, wonderful, good, awesome story, but i was wondering if there are going to be more chapters to this addicting, wonderful, good, great, awesome story!
It's an interesting concept-- you seem to be aware of the need for edits, and editing it progressivly, so I won't waste your time with that.
I am, however, a bit confused about the summary of this story-- by "hentie" I assume you mean the japanese word for pervert? The correct romanji is "Hentai". Not to be mean-- just trying to help. :D
Keep it up!
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War (Chapter 1) - Wed 06 Apr 2011
YAAAAY! I am sooooo excited... I rerally loved the preview you gave me ^_~ .. I hope you continue this story!
I added it to my favs, so I know the moment you update!
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i love this story already. You have such a creative idea for this =)
:) (Chapter 1) - Tue 05 Apr 2011
interesting story. cant wait to see how sessho reacts to kags. update soon
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