Wow *.* This is such an original idea :) Never seen this coming, though it's quite logical from biological pov ;> Makes sense ^_^ But I don't understand 2 things: why does Kuro think he's a beast? And why is Kishi so against this idea, I thought that he would be the one to understand Kuro since he's full youkai o.O Besides he was so possessive of Kagome as a child, I kind of... thought he would ask permission, not Kuro. Ehh I guess everything will be clear soon... Very soon pls? ^^ Can't wait to see next chapter soo pleaasee don't let me wait too long it would kill me :P
I am glad you gave the warning but also that there will be reasoning behind what will be coming. That it is the custom of another species puts a whole new light on the matter. This is not saying I am a supporter of incest; in truth I find it incredibly disturbing. However... in such a background I can at least see some sense of logic in Why as it has been explained. I am curious.
Did you give a thorough description of Kuro? Perhaps I should read back a chapter for I'm not picturing him clearly to visualize why he might be less liked/wanted by females.
Thanks for writing.
Sessygurl (Chapter 12) - Sat 16 Jul 2011
I didnt think it was sick and your explanations in it was great it gives a nice curve to the story. I just wish we had more of a description of the boys in order to know why they are feared and whatnot. I myself started to feel bad for them. More so Kuro. Do they look like Beast or Wolverine??
I saw the twins coming, that was pretty obvious for me ;> Pls update soon ^_^
Rachel (Chapter 11) - Thu 23 Jun 2011
WoW TWINS?! I would force my husband to take care of the children and then laugh at him.
Read this completely on AFF, great story. I loved the whole thing, hope to read more from ya soon. :)
Olga (Chapter 11) - Wed 18 May 2011
Please add in the resume to history, that it contains incest between mother and children. I have stopped to read your history on other site as me as mother has revolted your idea of sexual relations between mother and sons. It is simple disrespect for the readers! Follow an example other authors who warn about it in the summary and in the history beginning. It would not be desirable to address to administrators of a site because of your improvidence....
toni (Chapter 11) - Sun 15 May 2011
I saw the twins coming!! R they goin to stay that way? Sessy seems cold in this chapter
Sunset Senshi (Chapter 11) - Sun 15 May 2011
You should make her have a girl next three boys and than a girl would be funny and there's a saying that sais three boys than a girl is good luck. Great story! Continue to love it.
Please update soon. I cant wait to see what happens next. I love this story. Thanks
Mia (Chapter 1) - Tue 10 May 2011
AAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWEEEEEEEEEE only 4 more chaps as mouch as i love this one can u extend it plz i highly think u make exceptions 4 anyone but this story looks like it is going to be more than 14 chaps plz make it longer even if it is an ectra to plz i love this one u did an excellent job hurry up an update do u know how long u took 2 update this 1 thou it was worth the wait love the story plz ipdate soon love the story make it longer i see that u only hav 1 story after tis 1 is fin wat kind r u gonin 2 work on i am puzzled any way wat ever 1 u decide 2 work on it will be awesome and i will be sure to update kk ttyl my bf is takin me to breakfast lol i want a belguim waffel did i spell it rite anyway who cares how it is spelt lol hope u update soon kk
aww that was such a nice chapter! :) can't wait for more! i love this story even if it's keeping me from my paper!
Kishi has to be the cutest sweetest child on the planet, no joke!! Completely adorable and precious. I really enjoy the length of each chapter. You flow really well without it become monotonous or being overly detailed for such long chapter lengths. I really enjoy the relationship between Sesshomaru and Kagome and how you really play up on real insecurities in those relationships especially with the lack of communication. It shows how important it is to talk to your partner, ya know. Loving every chapter and can't wait to see what happens next.
Sunset Senshi (Chapter 9) - Sat 30 Apr 2011
Love it! It was cute, sad, and a bit comical. I'm glad Kagome and Sesshomaru are on good terms and that Sesshomaru is finally warming up to his son and that Kishi is doing the same. Adorable, I can't wait for the next chapter :)
The disappointed reader (Chapter 9) - Sat 30 Apr 2011
You should warn your readers, that the end of your heads will be with dirty incest! Mother and the son! Disgustingly! You liked me as the author, but now I am disappointed you!
Awww poor Kishi and poor Kagome! I don't understand why Sesshoumaru won't make it official. :/ It was a happier chapter.. but parts made me sad! I can't wait to read more! I love this story! :)
AHHHHHH! Kishi is just too friggin cute!
You have such a great storie I can't wait till you update again.
wonderfully written i have been looking for a fic that had some of these qualities but havent been able to find it until now when i came upon ur story :) and you've written it so wonderfully i cant get enough please do update soon :) i love this fic!
Good chapter! :)
Itoe (Chapter 8) - Thu 21 Apr 2011
Ohhh Kishi is sooo cute!! :D I want a child like him... i want him to bite his father... xD lol :D
thx for updating. :D
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