please update soon please

Great story, I read it on fanfiction. Keep it coming.

Great story, I read it on fanfiction. Keep it coming.

Great story, I read it on fanfiction. Keep it coming.

Oh you are killing me.I hope everything goes together well & you know Sango is going to tell her to go for it. I just hope Sessh takes her somewhere they can go crazy & get loud while they get familiar with each other. I'm also glad she'll be sealing the well to keep her family safe & I can't wait to see Naraku as nothing more than goop & then dust. I just wonder if in freeing Midoriko once it's over,if at that time Kagome is a Miko Mate of a Tai Youkai, that the Jewel will then become one with Kagome,as she's the most powerful Miko & Mate to the most powerful youkai.Come to think of it, if she was born with the jewel within her then the Kami's or who ever decides these things & placed the Jewel within her at birth must have made sure her own Miko powers were powerful enough to subdue & control the Jewel to begin with & since the jewel was taken from her body she's become a stronger Miko & by becomeing the Mate of an Inu Tai Youkai she tied her soul to his,taking in some of his essence & causing her to become more powerful.The jewel holds like 1,000 youkai & if in freeing Midoriko,the jewel merges with Kagome to keep everything equal...would it change Kagome into a Miko/Youkai or with her being the mate of Sessh(the most powerful Inu tai youkai-as a tai youkai is the most powerful youkai,right?),would it change her into a Miko Inu Tai Youkai????

I can't wait to see them become 1 .Then as they'll be Life Mates by the time she sees her family again will her & Sessh have children & grandchildren or will they be pups & grand pups ? with her being a powerful being I wouldn't think she'd have hanyou  children...maybe full youkai with miko powers or immunity to miko powers?

I can't wait to see your next chapter

FAVORITE CHAPTER SO FAR!!! just fix the spelling errors and it will be perfect!

Awesome story!

This story looks to be promising in what I have read. However I highly recommend a beta to spell check and fix grammar mistakes. 

I love this story & can't wait to see what will happen next. I love how her mom just happened to have clothes from the time period that Kagome is going to & her mom is so open to her traveling,makes you wonder. I want to see Kagome & Sessh get together soon. I can't imagine being that close to the one I love for that long & not do anything.Especially knowing they'll have a hard time finding such privacy when they return to the pack & the fact that her mom's behind her makes it even easier.

This was also a good chapter.I know she had to come home to take exams & remember her saying when she was done with her exams she'd have alot of time to seriously find the shards & kill Naraku but, I forgot if she's taking her exams to just be free for the summer or if these were the last set of exams she'd be taking to graduate high school. If she 1st got dragged down the well at 15 then she should be  like 18 so it'd make sense if she's done

The way her & her Mom were talking it seemed like she'd be done with school soon.Her Mom appears to know what Kagome wants as if they've discussed it many times & her Mom seems to accept that Kagome feels like she belongs in the past & wants to live there when she's done with her responsibility to complete the Jewel.It's as if she was trying to remind Kagome she's not a kid anymore & it's time she followed her heart & stopped letting fear hold her back from making choices. Considering she's been going back & forth so long,her Mom's aware of how much Kagome's matured while being in the past,taking on the responsibility of an orphaned Kit she already considers her own child,seeing her daughter interact with Sessh compared to how she interacted with Inu,her Mom's aware the decisions Kagome needs to make are major ones & they include more than just herself.

The way her Mom's so accepting of Kagome going back & forth makes you wonder if her mom knows more than she's letting on & is trying to stay positive,keep Kagome positive & let fate run it's course.I often wonder if Kagome's really just a human Miko born in the future.I think the Kami's(God or Fate) have an odd way of doing things & it's a bit off that Kagome ,as a mere human, was born with the Jewel within her body & just happens to live with a well that is a portal to another time.The Jewel is a powerful item that holds enormous youkai & miko powers.It was original made to contain the spirits of both powerful youkai & miko. If she's close to 18 or coming of age & she's more than human it would be so cool if she became something other with immense power so we wouldn't have to worry about her lifespan & her & Sessh could live long happy lives with powerful pups. We know from when the evil one tried to absorb her soul in a powerful mirror that could hold hundreds of souls,when they tried to absorb Kagome's soul,her soul was so massive in size that it cracked the mirror, freeing the part of Kagome's soul it tried to take & any others it held. When that happened Kagome was already living without a piece of her soul from when that witch tried to steal her soul to bring back Kikyo but Kagome without training was powerful enough to pull back almost her entire soul,leaving a small piece in Kikyo bringing her back as an undead being in a body of graveyard soil & bonesIf a shard of it can be corrupted by beings with hate,greed or anger inside & yet no matter what Kagome feels she can only purify it. Seems as if in the 3 years she's been using her Miko powers have grown into like 2nd nature.

I can't wait to see what's going to happen between them...When 2 beings spend 2 weeks together & really want each other,anything is possible. Can she be upset with him for meeting her at school if she never discussed with him what he'd be doing while she was in classes ??? Does she have class every day??? The more I think of her age & how long it's been I keep wondering what kinda school she's in??Is she just taking classes to make up for the time she's missed or is she taking classes in a certain area of study ??? Can she really still be going to school,especially if she misses months & weeks at a time?? Being gone so much,it'd be better if she were home schooled or such & just go in for exams maybe???

I can't wait to see what happens next.

This chapter was good & this was only their 1st day.What is he going to do when Kagome sleeps at night?? Will he be allowed to hang out in her room like Inuyasha was always allowed & heck he used the window instead of the front door??

If he thought the t.v. at the store was cool & spends time watching t.v.,remote in hand, flipping through the channels while he's at her home, either when she's at school during the day or in her room with her at niight while she's studying or sleeping & she's got satellite t.v. at her home,he could end up getting quite the education 

I'm dying to know if they'll end up together by the time they return to the feudal era.

Can you imagine spending 2 weeks with Sessh staying at your home, with him openly expressing his desire for you,repeatedly telling you he wants you to be his,while he's also being very physically affectionate & making it through the 2 weeks with your virginity intact ???

I eagerly await your next chapter update

I can't wait to see what you come up with next but I love your story .I was thinking of what Sessh would do while at Kagomes??? & different ways to torture him...??? I can't wait till they get together & I think after what he said on the train that I want him to take her as much as he wants to.

I just read this for the 1st time today & look forward to more. I love this story & I don't know why I didn't notice it sooner. I can't wait to see where Sessh is going to sleep while in Kagome's time as they are accustomed to sleeping together.I believe in the series Inu comes & goes thru her bedroom window & when he stays the nite it's usually in her room with her so I doubt her Mom will care if Sessh sleeps with Kagome in her room.I think her entire family knows by now that demons don't sleep at night unless they really need it. With the way her Grandpa is about history I'm sure he'll be in awe of Sessh & be aware of who he is 'The Great Lord of the Western Lands' or such,I can just see her Grandpa making him crazed with questions,showing him all the artifacts that have shown up at the shrine over the years & god forbid if Sessh has any coins or anything of the like he'd be willing to give the old man to keep as her Gramps is so proud of all his artifacts & such.(Remember the Evil Sword 'Sounaga?' that belonged to Sessh & Inu's dad). I don't remember if you gave a physical description of Kagome & I know in the Manga she has blue eyes & the anime she has brown eyes,I don't know or recall which you gave her or what you have planned for her but,I will admit I like the idea of Kagome with blue eyes as most Japanese have dark hair & eyes & I like the idea of Kagome being different & sticking out more. I love when she's portrayed as a strong,intelligent,powerful & beautiful person as I see her as being kind,caring,honest,honorable,forgiving & protective of each & all of her friends & even when they travel she treats the peasants the same as wealthy.(I like when her good points aren't looked down upon as weakness)

I love your story & I can't wait to read more & see where your story takes us next. 

I can't wait to see what happens in your next chapter. I love Sessh & Kagome together & I have to admit I'm really enjoying the way you've brought them closer. Unlike Inu who has no interest in the future & the amazing changes to come, I can only imagine with Sessh's intelligence how he'll take all these new experiences. 

PLEASE CHECK YOUR GRAMMAR AND SPELLING TOO MANY MISTAKES THAT ARE REPELING READERS!!!!

I like your story so far, however, there are a lot of grammatical errors. Uses of commas are put in places where they are not supposed to be, and there are places where commas and periods need to be. Try working on your spelling and punctuation. You have a nice story going here, but there are a lot of people will criticize you for spelling and punctuation. 

You have a nice story going on here, and I'm sorry if my review sounds negative. I'm not trying to be, I'm just trying to help you out with some unwanted negative attention from some sticklers for grammar and spelling. I really do like what you have here, though. :)