Keep posting!!!!!

Finish this. Please. It's a good story.

Kagome is very OOC.....She's been lured by false promises before (and even some true promsies and bribes) and she's never faltered. So why would she now? Not trying to flame, just understand

Great story, keep it coming.

I have two things to say:

I love the plot, very interesting!  Your discriptive writing does pull me in and I love the "deal with a demon" type situation.

Kagome does appear very ooc though, I don't think she would voluntarily kill someone out of her love for Inuyasha and then say that it wouldn't be impossible lol. 

Other than that, I will continue reading because it is a good story. Happy writing!

 

Hm, I feel Kagome is very out of character, but the entire story as a whole is an interesting idea and I look forward to finding out what happens! :) Keep up the good work! :) I'm enjoying it!

Poor Kagome, being Sesshomaru's servant is probably one of the worst jobs in the world lol

oh yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great job girl, keep up the good work and feeding me more chapters so i can give you more reviews!!!!!

HAH! good one! Please update soon--love to know how Sess sorts this one out with Jaken.... :D

lol poor Kagome, hows she gonna explain this one?

LOVE IT!!

Intriguing :)  More please!

Well now this getting very interesting! I can't wait until you update next, so PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASEEEEE!!!!

Good story, I cant' wait to see what happens next! Please Please Please UPDATE SOON!!!!

Hmm... It's not like I don't like descriptive writing; it's more to do with how you describe things...

I'm not quite sure how to put it.

Either way, don't look at any of this in a negative light!

Generally, I like your idea and although your story could use a bit of touching up, I can't wait to see what happens next!! :)

Umm... Overall, I like it but I find it a bit overtly descriptive in areas and I dislike purple prose...

Maybe it's just me... :S