Great story, keep it coming.
I have two things to say:
I love the plot, very interesting! Your discriptive writing does pull me in and I love the "deal with a demon" type situation.
Kagome does appear very ooc though, I don't think she would voluntarily kill someone out of her love for Inuyasha and then say that it wouldn't be impossible lol.
Other than that, I will continue reading because it is a good story. Happy writing!
Lyss (Chapter 12) - Tue 31 Jan 2012
Hm, I feel Kagome is very out of character, but the entire story as a whole is an interesting idea and I look forward to finding out what happens! :) Keep up the good work! :) I'm enjoying it!
Poor Kagome, being Sesshomaru's servant is probably one of the worst jobs in the world lol
Kar (Chapter 8) - Sat 02 Jul 2011
oh yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great job girl, keep up the good work and feeding me more chapters so i can give you more reviews!!!!!
fatcatmom (Chapter 8) - Thu 30 Jun 2011
HAH! good one! Please update soon--love to know how Sess sorts this one out with Jaken.... :D
smitten kitten (Chapter 8) - Thu 30 Jun 2011
lol poor Kagome, hows she gonna explain this one?
lisa (Chapter 4) - Tue 14 Jun 2011
LOVE IT!!
Intriguing :) More please!
Well now this getting very interesting! I can't wait until you update next, so PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASEEEEE!!!!
Good story, I cant' wait to see what happens next! Please Please Please UPDATE SOON!!!!
Elle (Chapter 2) - Fri 01 Apr 2011
Hmm... It's not like I don't like descriptive writing; it's more to do with how you describe things...
I'm not quite sure how to put it.
Either way, don't look at any of this in a negative light!
Generally, I like your idea and although your story could use a bit of touching up, I can't wait to see what happens next!! :)
Elle (Chapter 1) - Wed 30 Mar 2011
Umm... Overall, I like it but I find it a bit overtly descriptive in areas and I dislike purple prose...
Maybe it's just me... :S
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