Very nicely done. I liked it ^^
*pokes you for more* @_@
What? No chapter 2?! ^_~ This definitely needs another chapter, or a sequel. :)
THIS IS A GOOD START, BUT IT IS TOO SHORT ! MAKE IT A CHAPTER STORY, IT WOULD MAKE MORE SENSE!
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