a Mysticlady (Chapter 3) - Wed 30 Mar 2011

Oooh I got chills. Wonderful piece. I love this. Great job of character and setting. I grew me in and now I can't wait for more chapters.

You have done a superb job creating suspence and keeping us  tangle in your plot. I loved the interaction of Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha and then the bond that was made between Kagome and Sesshoumaru.

Again, great job and hope to see more soon.


TruGemini (Chapter 3) - Tue 29 Mar 2011

Ooooohhhhh!!! I so love this chapter! OMG! You pulled me in with their stories of what Naraku did. I'm soooo excited. You have to update soon. I gotta know what's on that chip. I've never read a crime/drama story like this before. This is an awesome work!


Daniella (Chapter 2) - Sun 27 Mar 2011

I was seriously starting to think you'd never return to writing and yet here you are with another winner!!  I can't wait to see where this one goes and as always a fantastic job!!!!!!!!!!!


TruGemini (Chapter 2) - Sun 27 Mar 2011

Another mystery surrounding Sesshomaru. Was that Rin's room? What happened to the person staying there? What happened during the fire incident? I am anxious for more!


amy (Chapter 1) - Sat 26 Mar 2011

Excellent start, keep up the good work!More updates pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!


TruGemini (Chapter 1) - Sat 26 Mar 2011

Quite interesting first chapter. I'm excited to see where this goes. Another crime/ drama piece? I'm still holding on to Unable to commit. This is going to be exciting. Please update soon!


Midnight (Chapter 1) - Sat 26 Mar 2011

WoW,coolio story, Can't wait for the next chapter. Looking forward to reading your update soon.


tenchi no mai (Chapter 1) - Sat 26 Mar 2011

What a great start to an interesting fic that appears to have more going on than just the obvious surface story.  I'm eagerly looking forward to the next chapter.  


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