Oooh I got chills. Wonderful piece. I love this. Great job of character and setting. I grew me in and now I can't wait for more chapters.
You have done a superb job creating suspence and keeping us tangle in your plot. I loved the interaction of Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha and then the bond that was made between Kagome and Sesshoumaru.
Again, great job and hope to see more soon.
Ooooohhhhh!!! I so love this chapter! OMG! You pulled me in with their stories of what Naraku did. I'm soooo excited. You have to update soon. I gotta know what's on that chip. I've never read a crime/drama story like this before. This is an awesome work!
I was seriously starting to think you'd never return to writing and yet here you are with another winner!! I can't wait to see where this one goes and as always a fantastic job!!!!!!!!!!!
Another mystery surrounding Sesshomaru. Was that Rin's room? What happened to the person staying there? What happened during the fire incident? I am anxious for more!
amy (Chapter 1) - Sat 26 Mar 2011
Excellent start, keep up the good work!More updates pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
Quite interesting first chapter. I'm excited to see where this goes. Another crime/ drama piece? I'm still holding on to Unable to commit. This is going to be exciting. Please update soon!
WoW,coolio story, Can't wait for the next chapter. Looking forward to reading your update soon.
What a great start to an interesting fic that appears to have more going on than just the obvious surface story. I'm eagerly looking forward to the next chapter.
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