One word: brilliant. I love it! I love everything about this one-shot (hoping it will turn into a story ^^). Sesshomaru AND Kagome were in character - job well done- and the plot was simple but very good. And the lemon (well, really a lime) was amazing. Some authors tend to drag out every little detail (which can be good at times) but you kept it short, sweet and oh so intoxicating.  I do hope to see more chapters (and more lemons >D) as I see a good future for this story :3 
Again, keep up the good work :D 
  
  
      
That was simple and to-the-point! It does leave room for more, however. Might I urge you to continue this? Turn it into a proper story? It needn't be long, but it would be interesting to see how it plays out, with Kags in such an unlikely job, and being so matter-of-fact about it too! 
      
TKE (Chapter 1) - Thu 24 Mar 2011 
One word comes to mind.....WOW!!!!! 
      
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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