One word: brilliant. I love it! I love everything about this one-shot (hoping it will turn into a story ^^). Sesshomaru AND Kagome were in character - job well done- and the plot was simple but very good. And the lemon (well, really a lime) was amazing. Some authors tend to drag out every little detail (which can be good at times) but you kept it short, sweet and oh so intoxicating. I do hope to see more chapters (and more lemons >D) as I see a good future for this story :3
Again, keep up the good work :D
That was simple and to-the-point! It does leave room for more, however. Might I urge you to continue this? Turn it into a proper story? It needn't be long, but it would be interesting to see how it plays out, with Kags in such an unlikely job, and being so matter-of-fact about it too!
TKE (Chapter 1) - Thu 24 Mar 2011
One word comes to mind.....WOW!!!!!
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