you did a good job with the pregnacy part. looking forward to more from you. im glad you didnt go into detail with a lemon. you kept it simple and sometimes simple is good. it was funny to see naraku in a different light than what im used to. i guess you can use the characters from inuyasha any way you choose. good story. i liked it. bye
I adore the way you wrote about Kagome's love of books! That is exactly how I feel about the wonderful written world! Also, I would like to mention how sublime Sesshoumaru and Kagome's first meeting was. I really enjoyed this chapter and look forward to reading more when I have time.
Dria (Chapter 12) - Fri 09 Nov 2012
I love this story! thank you so much for writing it.
Sophie (Chapter 1) - Sat 09 Jan 2010
Oh dear it was lovely story. Normaly I don't like stories hat are written in the point of view of some character, but this one is really, really good. i liked it and I hope you will decide to write something more. Cheers!
NOOOOOO why did it have to end......... your story is really good ........ i like it a lot.
ghost_youkai (Chapter 12) - Thu 02 Oct 2008
| Though this story took me two days to read due to the time I read it, it left me craving for more when I was only two chapters away from finishing it. And for any chapter to make me crave the finish is a well written story indeed!
| I Loved Reading Your Story. It's so original. Being a bookworm myself this story was very close to my heart. I believe that you write extremely well and I hope you write more stories. smiles
| I loved this story! I just finished it, and damn, it was good! ^.^
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