Oh, what a cliffhanger!!  I do hope you continue this story to the end. I really want to know what happens to Inuyasha, and if Kagome becomes Sesshy's mate or not.  So, please, update soon??  :D

Actually....  there are a lot of misused words. I'm feeling lazy right now though to point them all out. Apologies.

--Kaminoko (c)2011

You have misused the word breathe in the very first paragraph.  If you are worried and panicking, someone will tell you to "breathe" so you will take "breaths".  Each breath you take constitutes breathing. I hope outlining each form of breath, helps you. 

 --Kaminoko (c)2011

lol that's so Sesshoumaru. Screw explanations, just assume she knows what's going on. Until, of course, he finds out differently.

Wonderful! Cant wait for more!

ohhh inu no taisho was the king?? didnt see that one coming :) cant wait for more!

i dont think i like yue... trying to horn in on sesshys pie....

i want to read more!!

lol what is she? just a dancer? i wanna know what KIND of dancer!! i dont remember!!

LOL i can just imagin Kagome LALALAing. Hilarious!

ohhh i see. i was thinking more along the lines of cameras.

uh oh. whats going on?!?!?

awe poor kagome... and sesshoumaru... i hope it gets better!

ugh, Inuyasha's such an arse. I hope Sesshoumaru kills him for what he did!

uh oh. i feel a situation coming on!

*huggles sesshoumaru*

poor kagome... and sweet sesshoumaru!!

talking on chat made me want to read this all over again :)

I really want to see Sessh & Kagome together. I'm so confused as I think this was the 1st time that any sort of real info was given in regards to the depth of the relationship between Kagome & Inuyasha.I'm kind of bummed that from what this last chapter states Kagome & Inu were married or mated. I don't know why but I just find that part awful. I don't know if it meant that she & he were married or Mated but either way I don't know why but just hearing of it horrified me. I had more hope for Kagome & Sessh finding happiness if it was found that Kagome & Inu had never been intimate & that not only was he screwing everything but since it mentioned Kikyo was the one he was sleeping with before Kagome left Japan in fear for her life I was kinda hoping that he'd marked Kikyo as his Mate &  in his deluded mind Inu felt that Kagome was his also & that was why he'd said to her 'if I can't have you than nobody can' & then attempted to kill her but was luckily saved by Sessh. I guess I don't understand the difference in importance between the Demon courts & the human courts rulings & how the ruling by the demon courts can keep her safe from Inu or keep him in the country when or once the ban from the human courts has lifted & he is allowed to travel to Canada again.

Dark and twisted, but I truly like your story. I've been reading and following it since the first chapter but my laziness kept me form commenting till you reached the 12th one... shame on me!

keep on going! :)

I found & read this story today.I both love & hate this story as I want Sessh & Kagome to fall in love. It's hard to imagine from what I've read so far that Sessh will see her as anything more than an annoying girl who was once his Inu's girlfriend & now needs protection. I wish that although she & Inu were close they never had sex cause unless Kags was still pure I'd find it hard for him to see past her relationship with Inu. I'll have to wait & see what happens next in this story as I don't imagine anything will change between them for a long time. I find it hard to read Sessh & Kag stories where Sessh is with other women.

I look forward to the next chapter to find out what will happen next.