First thing that comes to mind is.......
"Little girls, this seems to say,
Never stop upon your way;
Never trust a stranger friend,
No one knows how it will end.
As you're pretty, so be wise;
Wolves may lurk in everyguise.
Now as then, 'tis simple truth,
That sweetest tongue has sharpest tooth."
~Company of Wolves/Charles Perrault
Ashes (Chapter 1) - Wed 09 Mar 2011
Eeeeewwwwwww! I'm glad I didn't get to the gorey part till after I'd eaten all my corned beef. *shudders* You did a good job.
Just FYI: Just after Sess-dog says “This one is no wolf, red child, it is youkai.” you used 'no' instead of 'know', either that or a few words got left out of the sentence.
Where did you find the other adaptations of Red Ridinghood? I'm always super curious about the original format of fairy tales that I'd been told as a child. A lot of them are made of pure nightmare juice.
Jay_chAn (Chapter 1) - Wed 09 Mar 2011
LOVED IT!! this was one of the best fanfic fariy tale stories i have ever read! To be honest i havn't read a re-make of Little Red Riding Hood. Great job! =]
Loved it.. though.. i am wondering if it would have been better if he stayed in dog form..
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