I'm incredibly intrigued! I like the atmosphere & suspense you built. I wasn't sure if the village headman was going to hand Kagome over to a savior or a villian. I'm looking forward to finding out why the village would trust a demon when (from the prologue, if I read it correctly) demons seem to have been all but wiped out or are in hiding.
I can't wait to see what happens next :)
I like your story, can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon please!
Addy (Chapter 3) - Thu 07 Apr 2011
Shippou~! <3
Beautifully written! I love your style~ Hopefully Kagome's head will feel better soon...a rock to the skull sure does make things harder to think about...
I like this story so far. :) It sounds very interesting. Please update soon.
So far I'm interested please continue
Oh my goodness. This feels like a good one! I can already sense the impending terror ._. Please keep up the good work! :) If you need help with anything, I'm an English Education major~
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