Hm, interesting...though I am a bit confused about the lords. Once, you wrote that it was an inu and a tora (and Sesshomaru) and then it was an inu and an ookami? Or was the inu the ookami? 

Anyway, I'll be looking forward to updates. ^.^

This is such an excellent story. You've made everyone feel so real, kept them IC but still changed a bit with time.  I can't wait to see where you go with it.   Please update again soon.

soooooooooooooo awesome, please update, this is really good!!!!!!!!!!!

Good story!  All I could think of with that last part was "welcome to my parlor, said the spider to the fly" :p Poor Kagome.  She can get into the most akward situations.  Please update soon!

I wonder, as you basing the titles on the actually chapter. Because that's interesting. Also, I agree - did Kagome change ( how powerful has she become ) among other things. I would love to see what she learned from the monks. Sesshoumaru seems to be in character. I'm your best friend, but you neeeeever let me see your stories until you post them. It's soooo unfair. This is really good so far and I know you take everything into consideration about putting in everything people ask about. >( You better! I love you. Waa Waa. I should sneak around your computer while I'm on it, but you're good at locking your stuff. Even if you are sitting on the bed. Keep working on this story and coming up with the plotline. 100chapters. FTW.

The story looks promising...I really like how you begin. You have a really nice writing style. I am quite eager to see how it goes.*wink*

I don't know if you intended it or not, but be very careful at how powerful you make Kagome "so she stayed for almost two years before the monks said that they had nothing left to teach her, show her. ". I am deeply in love with a very powerful, strong-willed character but I really like to find out HOW she become one=> try to outline some experiences...simply mentioning what she did is not very convincing in creating that character. You can outline this by dreams, nightmares, flashbacks, diary etc. I  know that is way too early to make presumptions but I really like how this story started and well you know the saying ...better be safe than sorry...

It could be interesting ...you didn't give any real info on whether Kagome has changed physically or become more powerful or if she was allowed thru the well again because of a destiny..

.didn't mention what happened to the Jewel,is it gone,did it return inside her,did she have to make a wish ???...you mentioned years past & she got older but you didn't  mention if she aged.???

....you didn't mention why 3 of the 4 Lords would be wandering around in bad weather or why Kagome as intelligent as she is would refuse to stop & get to somewhere safe unless she felt drawn to something,somewhere or someone & couldn't stop??? did the 3 lords (I would imagine that they'd be like the 3 most powerful youkai) stop or notice a youkai & a human ,unless they sensed or felt her power & knew it was the Shikon Miko.....could they've been looking or hoping for someone like her??? were they sent out by a seer to seek out the Shikon Miko  for she has returned & is the hope to save Youkai's or the 4 lands???   is she still human,more than human ??? is she really a Miko-Inu Youkai sent to the future & what ever spell she's been under for protection ends with her 21st year & that is the reason she's delirious & trudging thru the frozen tundra with Shippo???? Shippo can fly can't he??? & if he's older is he stronger ????

I guess the more we'll read .......the more we'll know what's going on ???

I just can't help but think it odd that the most powerful ....The Shikon  Miko  happens to be wandering in the snow,near death &